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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 10 March 2025 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Bini discography

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Nominator(s): ROY is WAR Talk! 01:52, 17 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

After the promoted FL of List of awards and nominations received by Bini, I will nominate this.

If I cannot respond as soon as possible, my colleague editor and significantly contributed on this discography, AstrooKai will respond to any suggestions and recommendations on this discography.

ROY is WAR Talk! 01:52, 17 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

History6042

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  • "the most streamed female OPM artist and most streamed P-pop group on the platform." -> "the most streamed female OPM artist and P-pop group on the platform." Having most streamed twice is redundant.
  • "becoming the First P-pop group to top" -> "becoming the first P-pop group to top"
  • "The Billboard Philippines Top Philippine Songs chart was first introduced in July 2024 as a replacement for the discontinued Philippines Songs chart by Billboard" is a sentence and needs a period.
  • I think all the table headers showing "Ref." should be "Ref(s)."
  • "will be released as vinyl records in December 2024 as part of their collaboration with Star Music." needs to be updated, December 2024 has passed, so change to the past tense please.
  • I don't think certifications needs to be linked twice.
  • "With over 100 million streams from their song "Pantropiko" and amassing over six million monthly listeners on Spotify" -> "With over 100 million streams from their song "Pantropiko" and over six million monthly listeners on Spotify"
  • Ping when done please. History6042😊 (Contact me) 11:34, 17 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Hello, History6042!

Vestrian24Bio

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  • Refs 24 & 40 - duplicated citations.
  • Refs 52 & 53 - original source link.
  • Only {{Bini}} navbox is enough here.

Vestrian24Bio 13:33, 18 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Vestrian24Bio!
Refs 24 & 40 - duplicated citations. Done.
Refs 52 & 523 - original source link. Done.
Only {{Bini}} navbox is enough here. Done.

ROY is WAR Talk! 14:45, 18 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • Could mention the number of soundtrack appearances in the lead sentence as well.
  • No need to link countries per WP:GEOLINK.
  • "comeback sophomore album" - what does 'comeback' supposed to mean...
  • '' [[Feel Good (Bini album)|Feel Good]].'' should be ''[[Feel Good (Bini album)|Feel Good]]''.
  • No need to link "Pantropiko" and extended play again in the thrid paragraph. Also just EP is enough as the full form is already given in the first paragraph.
  • No need to add "rowspan", if it's for only one row.
  • Could use the {{Ref.}} template in the table headers.
  • Should add abbreviations to PHL and PARI on the first table.
  • Could link certifications to List of music recording certifications directly.
  • Studio albums caption should be "List of studio albums, with sales figures, and certifications", similarly for EPs table "List of extended plays, with sales figures, and certifications".
  • Singles captions should be,
    1. "List of singles, showing selected chart positions, and associated albums"
    2. "List of promotional singles, showing associated albums"
    3. "List of other charted songs, showing selected chart positions, and associated albums"
    4. "List of collaboration singles, showing associated albums"
  • In "Karera" (Race), "Pantropiko" (Tropical), Talaarawan (Diary) and "Salamin, Salamin" (Mirror, Mirror) - what are the terms in parenthesis; assuming they're translations, are they necessary..?
  • Not necessary to link the albums and EPs in singles tables, because they're already linked above in the albums table and EPs table.
  • 15 singles, 11 promotional singles - update the counts...

Vestrian24Bio 13:29, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I just checked in on this FLC to see its progress and saw your other concerns unaddressed by the nominator at the moment. So I'll take this one for now.
  • Could mention the number of soundtrack appearances in the lead sentence as well.
Done. See revision 1276658104.
Done. See revision 1276658550.
  • "comeback sophomore album" - what does 'comeback' supposed to mean...
"Comeback" means its their new album release after long periods of time. Their last album, Born to Win, was released in 2021. The "comeback" is explicitly mentioned in the cited source that is supporting it[2], but let me know if it is better to remove the word or retain it.
  • '' [[Feel Good (Bini album)|Feel Good]].'' should be ''[[Feel Good (Bini album)|Feel Good]]''.
Done. See revision 1276659702.
  • No need to link "Pantropiko" and extended play again in the thrid paragraph. Also just EP is enough as the full form is already given in the first paragraph.
Done. See revision 1276659901.
  • No need to add "rowspan", if it's for only one row.
Done. See revision 1276660261.
  • Could use the {{Ref.}} template in the table headers.
Done. See revision 1276660556.
  • Should add abbreviations to PHL and PARI on the first table.
Done. See revision 1276661574.
Done. See revision 1276661957.
  • Studio albums caption should be "List of studio albums, with sales figures, and certifications", similarly for EPs table "List of extended plays, with sales figures, and certifications".
Done. See revision 1276662124.
  • Singles captions should be,
    1. "List of singles, showing selected chart positions, and associated albums"
    2. "List of promotional singles, showing associated albums"
    3. "List of other charted songs, showing selected chart positions, and associated albums"
    4. "List of collaboration singles, showing associated albums"
Done. See revision 1276662318.
  • In "Karera" (Race), "Pantropiko" (Tropical), Talaarawan (Diary) and "Salamin, Salamin" (Mirror, Mirror) - what are the terms in parenthesis; assuming they're translations, are they necessary..?
I'm not exactly sure if they are needed, as I saw other FL-rated discographies not having similar practices. You may ask Borgenland about this as they are the one who adds these translations to this discography and other Bini-related articles.
  • Not necessary to link the albums and EPs in singles tables, because they're already linked above in the albums table and EPs table.
Done. See revision 1276662994.
  • 15 singles, 11 promotional singles - update the counts...
Done. See revision 1276663240.
That is all. Let me or the nominator know if there are other issues you find needed addressing. Thanks! AstrooKai (Talk) 03:23, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
These are translations. I have been trying to reformat them to (lit. 'Tropical') for example but I haven't finished them yet given the number of other articles I handle. Borgenland (talk) 03:27, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Addendum: I am not sure about translation rules for such articles but I maintain the judgement that non-English speaking readers have a right to know what the words mean. Borgenland (talk) 15:59, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
All good, Support! Vestrian24Bio 11:45, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! AstrooKai (Talk) 11:49, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from ThedoctorWho

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  • "with six of their songs appeared as soundtracks" - wording feels off here, perhaps something like "with six of their songs appearing on soundtracks"?
  • What is the "Star Hunt Academy program" - perhaps a brief explanation?
  • iTunes Album Chart --> iTunes Album Chart
  • Ref 13 needs url-access=registration appended
  • In the third paragraph it may be helpful to enclose the translations inside {{Literal translation}} to avoid any confusion
  • "camp back in 2023" --> "camp in 2023"
  • "were released as vinyl records" --> "would be released as vinyl records"

Not much else for me to say here, nice work! TheDoctorWho (talk) 06:45, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • "with six of their songs appeared as soundtracks" - wording feels off here, perhaps something like "with six of their songs appearing on soundtracks"?
Done.
  • What is the "Star Hunt Academy program" - perhaps a brief explanation?
Done. Added it as a footnote.
Done.
  • Ref 13 needs url-access=registration appended
Done. Did this to all Rappler references.
  • In the third paragraph it may be helpful to enclose the translations inside {{Literal translation}} to avoid any confusion
Done.
  • "camp back in 2023" --> "camp in 2023"
Done.
  • "were released as vinyl records" --> "would be released as vinyl records"
Done.
See revision 1276699099 for the changes. Let me or the nominator know if there is anything else you think should be addressed. Thanks! AstrooKai (Talk) 08:14, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Looks great! Happy to support. TheDoctorWho (talk) 17:25, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! AstrooKai (Talk) 11:51, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • "With over 100 million streams from their song "Pantropiko"" => "With over 100 million streams of their song "Pantropiko""
  • " The album rose to the charts" - this doesn't make sense, do you mean " The album rose to the top of the charts"....?
  • "The group co-wrote the single, "Love Yourself", with a fan" => "The group co-wrote the single, "Love Yourself" with a fan"
  • "released their comeback sophomore album" - what is a "sophomore album"?
  • "The songs became a hit in 2024" - multiple songs can't become "a hit" (singular)
  • "on the social platform, TikTok" => "on the social platform TikTok"
  • "They together performed a" => "They performed together a"
  • "becoming the first P-pop group to top the magazine's chart" => "making them the first P-pop group to top the magazine's chart"
  • "announced that Bini's albums Born to Win, Feel Good, and debut EP, Talaarawan, would be" => "announced that Bini's albums Born to Win and Feel Good and their debut EP, Talaarawan, would be"
  • "released their single, "Blink Twice", and" => "released their single "Blink Twice" and"
  • Why is "Our Stories Shine This Christmas" listed twice?
  • Why are there two separate sets of notes, one with a lower-case a and then two with capital letters? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:39, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    • "With over 100 million streams from their song "Pantropiko"" => "With over 100 million streams of their song "Pantropiko""
    Done. See revision 1276756999.
    • " The album rose to the charts" - this doesn't make sense, do you mean " The album rose to the top of the charts"....?
    I just realized, shouldn't this sentence be removed per WP:SINGLEVENDOR? Since it talks about the album's performance on ITunes' chart.
    • "The group co-wrote the single, "Love Yourself", with a fan" => "The group co-wrote the single, "Love Yourself" with a fan"
    Done. See revision 1276757373.
    • "released their comeback sophomore album" - what is a "sophomore album"?
    "Sophomore" in the context of music means that it's the second album. But I removed this in line with MOS:SOPHOMORE, since the term is not widely understood outside the US. See revision 1276757890.
    • "The songs became a hit in 2024" - multiple songs can't become "a hit" (singular)
    Done. See revision NUM.
    • "on the social platform, TikTok" => "on the social platform TikTok"
    Done. See revision 1276758096.
    • "They together performed a" => "They performed together a"
    Done. See revision 1276758287.
    • "becoming the first P-pop group to top the magazine's chart" => "making them the first P-pop group to top the magazine's chart"
    Done. See revision 1276758480.
    • "announced that Bini's albums Born to Win, Feel Good, and debut EP, Talaarawan, would be" => "announced that Bini's albums Born to Win and Feel Good and their debut EP, Talaarawan, would be"
    Done. See revision 1276759062.
    • "released their single, "Blink Twice", and" => "released their single "Blink Twice" and"
    Done. See revision 1276759229.
    • Why is "Our Stories Shine This Christmas" listed twice?
    The first entry of this song, found in Bini discography § As lead artist, pertains to the version of the song where only the group sang it. That's why it's listed under the "As lead artist" table. The second entry of the song, found in Bini discography § Collaborations, pertains to the version of the song where the group sang it along with various artists of ABS-CBN. The song is the 2024 Christmas Station ID entry of the network. A Christmas Station ID is a Christmas jingle released by major entertainment networks in the Philippines. It has become an annual tradition, where these networks release these Christmas jingles, sang by their artists.
    OK, that makes sense BTW it looks like the second one is spelt wrong as it says "Our Stories Shines This Christmas" -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:22, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Done. Thanks for spotting it! AstrooKai (Talk) 02:01, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    • Why are there two separate sets of notes, one with a lower-case a and then two with capital letters?
    Resolved. Switched to upper-alpha styling for all footnotes. See revision 1276760639.
    If there are other issues you find, please let me or the nominator know. Thanks! AstrooKai (Talk) 15:59, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    I can still see "The album rose to the charts", which doesn't make sense, and the unnecessary comma in "on the social platform, TikTok". I would fix these but I don't know what the first one is meant to say -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:45, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm actually thinking twice on removing that entire sentence since it may fall under WP:SINGLEVENDOR. That sentence only demonstrates the fact that the album rose to iTunes chart. What do you think? AstrooKai (Talk) 20:22, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Makes sense -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:23, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Removed. AstrooKai (Talk) 20:54, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey man im josh

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This review is based on this version of the article.

  • Ref 5 – Link to ABS-CBN Entertainment
  • Ref 15 – Remove piping on ABS-CBN News, as it currently links to the ABS-CBN instead
  • Ref 11 – Link to SunStar
  • Ref 12 – No publisher or website listed
  • Refs 12, 20, 47, 48, 49, 52 – Remove "on Apple Music" from the title
  • Ref 17 – Add publish date
  • Ref 20 – Unnecessarily marked as dead, needs to be marked as live
  • Ref 29 – Add author
  • Ref 33 – Change website to ABS-CBN News
  • Ref 33 – Add publish date
  • Ref 37 – Add author
  • Ref 46 – Add author and publish date
  • Ref 47 – No publisher or website listed
  • Ref 48 – No publisher or website listed
  • Ref 49 – No publisher or website listed
  • Ref 51 – Note as needing a subscription
  • Ref 56 – Mark link as being down
  • Ref 62 – Add author
  • Studio albums table missing column scopes
  • Extended plays table missing column scopes

I focused mostly on consistency and possible missing parameters from references. Please ping me when the above has been addressed. Hey man im josh (talk) 16:03, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Thanks for taking up your time in thoroughly checking the references. I have addressed them and linked their respective diffs below.
Done.
Done.
Done.
  • Ref 12 – No publisher or website listed
Done.
  • Refs 12, 20, 47, 48, 49, 52 – Remove "on Apple Music" from the title
Done.
  • Ref 17 – Add publish date
Done.
  • Ref 20 – Unnecessarily marked as dead, needs to be marked as live
Done.
  • Ref 29 – Add author
Done.
Done.
  • Ref 33 – Add publish date
Done.
  • Ref 37 – Add author
Done.
  • Ref 46 – Add author and publish date
Done. With typo correction in revision 1277819657.
  • Ref 47 – No publisher or website listed
Done.
  • Ref 48 – No publisher or website listed
Done.
  • Ref 49 – No publisher or website listed
Done.
  • Ref 51 – Note as needing a subscription
Done.
  • Ref 56 – Mark link as being down
Done. Just updated the URL, but it's not down. It seems that the website changed their dating of their chart weeks.
  • Ref 62 – Add author
Done.
  • Studio albums table missing column scopes
Done.
  • Extended plays table missing column scopes
Done.
AstrooKai (Talk) 22:18, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
pinging Hey man im josh, I think they forgot to ping you. ROY is WAR Talk! 12:25, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks @Royiswariii.
I fixed one link that was broken in a reference, but other than that the formatting looks fine now. Support based on formatting. Hey man im josh (talk) 13:29, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 22:04, 9 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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