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Why the change to the hatnote? I believe it was to the disambig page
Changed hatnote to link to dab.
Danish-born American professional football tackle so, he was Danish playing American football? Or did he naturalize to American citizenship? If its not clear he naturalized, then shouldn't it say Danish-born professional American football tackle
Given that he served in the Navy, I think he had to have become a U.S. citizen.
being a member of the freshman football team there that year. --> where he was a member of the freshman football team.
Done.
He was described as --> He was described by The Post-Crescent at the time as
Done.
He was signed after impressing coach Curly Lambeau with his performance in the East–West Shrine Game. --> His performance in the East–West Shrine Game earlier that year impressed Packers' head coach Curly Lambeau.
Done.
Is there nothing else about his suspension??
There didn't seem to be anything else on it...
Afterwards, he joined the United States Navy to serve in World War II in the United States Navy, duplicating "Navy"
Done.
Maybe combine He was married and had two daughters. Jorgensen died on July 2, 1984, at the age of 73, in Arcadia, California to He was married and had two daughters.Jorgensen died on July 2, 1984, at the age of 73, in Arcadia, California, survived by his wife and two daughters.
Done.
References:
Formatted consistently and correctly and reliable for what is being cited
Ref #12 needs an access-date
Done.
Spot check: #4, 5, 6, 9, 12, 14, 16, 23 all look good
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Overall: Article is a recent GNG, long enough, sourced and passes an earwig check. The hook is interesting imo. I'm assuming that pro-football-reference.com is a reliable source on this, so the only thing left is the qpq.BuySomeApples (talk) 21:59, 19 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
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Article is a recent GNG, long enough, sourced and passes an earwig check. The hook is interesting imo. I'm assuming that pro-football-reference.com is a reliable source on this,