Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/SB19 videography/archive1
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- Nominator(s): – Relayed (t • c) 17:27, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, how is everyone feeling? I am back with my fifth FL nomination, another SB19 list! This comprehensive list documents the group's appearances on music videos, TV, films, online shows, and commercials since they debuted in 2018. This has been part of my ongoing efforts to eventually have the group get their own Featured Topic on Wikipedia. I recently finished revamping the list, and I believe I have drastically improved the list's quality over its previous state. With the help of other similar existing FLs as basis, I think this list is now ready to be considered for FL. I would be happy to address all your concerns, suggestions, and feedback; they are much appreciated. I sincerely thank the reviewers in advance who will put their time and effort here. – Relayed (t • c) 17:27, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
History6042
[edit]- All tables need captions..
- Done
- Can Park Se-eun be linked?
- Not done: There's not a Wikipedia page for Park Se-eun, and if I were to WP:REDLINK her, there's not really much information about her to redlink or create her page in the first place without being challenged in the long run.
- Can rows that are the same be merged, for example column of region in television is almost all the same.
- Done: I personally avoid merging cells much (because for me it just makes it difficult to read the tables), hence why it was like that previously. Although I merged some cells in the latest revision as suggested. There are only cells that I chose not to, specifically: 1) those with the {{N/A}} template, since it makes it difficult to edit the page using Visual Editor; 2) Notes because I think each show must have their own distinct notes row; and, 3) "Commercials" table under the "Company" column, so that it's easier to count how many commercials they have been in.
- Same with years.
- Done
- Could a table be made with summaries of the numbers of how many things they have been in? For example, Bini videography.
- Not done: Actually, the infobox template ({{Infobox artist discography}} used in that page was misused, and was intended for discography lists, not videographies. Also, there's not really a proper infobox for videographies / filmographies lists. Other similar pages that are also FLs stand without infoboxes anyway.
- Hi, History6042 and Relayed! I happened to come across this FLC and noticed the issue. Relayed is right—the infobox was misused in that article, and I’ve already removed it. I’m not sure who added it, but as Relayed pointed out, videographies typically don’t use infoboxes. Just thought I’d drop by and mention it. Best of luck with the FLC! AstrooKai (Talk) 13:24, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Not done: Actually, the infobox template ({{Infobox artist discography}} used in that page was misused, and was intended for discography lists, not videographies. Also, there's not really a proper infobox for videographies / filmographies lists. Other similar pages that are also FLs stand without infoboxes anyway.
- Ping when done please. History6042😊 (Contact me) 19:31, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, History6042. Thanks for having a look and leaving some suggestions. I have looked into your comments and made necessary changes, and they should be visible now in the latest revision of the page. Some were not implemented; I have also left comments above as to why that is. Let me know if you're okay with the changes and if you have anything else. Thank you! – Relayed (t • c) 12:22, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Okay, everything looks good, I support. History6042😊 (Contact me) 12:26, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you very much! – Relayed (t • c) 12:28, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Okay, everything looks good, I support. History6042😊 (Contact me) 12:26, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, History6042. Thanks for having a look and leaving some suggestions. I have looked into your comments and made necessary changes, and they should be visible now in the latest revision of the page. Some were not implemented; I have also left comments above as to why that is. Let me know if you're okay with the changes and if you have anything else. Thank you! – Relayed (t • c) 12:22, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
[edit]- "and a few films" - "a few" sounds a bit too casual. As films form such a tiny section of their overall videography, I would be tempted to remove this completely
- Removed
- "they only achieved breakthrough" => "they only achieved a breakthrough"
- Done
- "In addition, they have collaborated with Ben&Ben" => "In addition, they collaborated with Ben&Ben"
- Done
- "The group also endorsed numerous brands" => "The group have also endorsed numerous brands"
- Done
- " the group stars in their own variety show series," => " the group star in their own variety show series,"
- Done
- "and have once ventured into acting with main roles in self-released online short film, Ex-Mas (2020),[37] and web series, Our Zone: Anniversary Series (2021) and School Buddies (2022)" => "and have ventured into acting with main roles in the self-released online short film, Ex-Mas (2020),[37] and the web series, Our Zone: Anniversary Series (2021) and School Buddies (2022)"
- Done
- Descriptions like "A video depicting SB19 wandering in outdoor spaces." which are not complete sentences should not have full stops
- Done: Thanks for spotting that. I have revised the descriptions to be all full-on sentences. Let me know if I missed any.
- "after which shows them with apl.de.ap carrying on with their party on a yacht." => "after which it shows them with apl.de.ap carrying on with their party on a yacht."
- Done
- No description for "Time".....?
- Done: Simula at Wakas and the music video for "Time" were just released yesterday, April 25, so there's not much information going on right now about the video's plot (so I was planning to wait it out), but I guess I can add a temporary one based on its synopsis reported by ABS-CBN News.
- Is the "role" column really needed in the TV and web tables?
- Removed: I guess we can remove the column since they do not have specific characters portrayed at the moment.
- That's what I got
-- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:14, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, ChrisTheDude! Thanks a lot for leaving some comments. I believe I have sorted them all now. Let me know if you have anything else or if I missed something. I have also left some commentary. Thanks again! – Relayed (t • c) 15:19, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Hi, Chris! This is a friendly courtesy ping, in case the first one didn't go through, since it's been two days since I replied. Take your time, though, no pressure! Do let me know if you have anything else. – Relayed (t • c) 13:07, 28 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, ChrisTheDude! Thanks a lot for leaving some comments. I believe I have sorted them all now. Let me know if you have anything else or if I missed something. I have also left some commentary. Thanks again! – Relayed (t • c) 15:19, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:26, 28 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the support, Chris! – Relayed (t • c) 17:43, 1 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from TheDoctorWho
[edit]- This article needs a short description per WP:SDLIST
- Done: Currently set from "none" to "Videography of Filipino boy band"
- The alt text for the lead image needs modified per MOS:ALT (specifically the importance of context portion and the example of Elizabeth II
- Done: Removed unnecessary descriptions
- The same could be said for several of the images in the music video section
- Done: ditto
- This is one place where {{sronly}} may be useful, it's not a requirement by any means, but since all of the table captions are directly below their respective headers it's okay if they're hidden
- Done
- Given that there's only one region in the "Commercials" table, is it necessary to include?
- Removed: I guess that can go as well.
- References 27 and 68 are duplicates and should be merged
- Done: Merged
I think that's all I have! TheDoctorWho (talk) 04:37, 1 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, TheDoctorWho! I'll address your comments soon. Will ping once done. Thanks for stopping by! – Relayed (t • c) 17:43, 1 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, TheDoctorWho! I believe I have addressed all your comments. Let me know if I missed something or if you have anything else. Thanks again! – Relayed (t • c) 16:22, 3 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Happy to support, nice work! TheDoctorWho (talk) 06:01, 4 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the support! – Relayed (t • c) 12:39, 4 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Happy to support, nice work! TheDoctorWho (talk) 06:01, 4 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, TheDoctorWho! I believe I have addressed all your comments. Let me know if I missed something or if you have anything else. Thanks again! – Relayed (t • c) 16:22, 3 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comments by Alavense
[edit]- The Filipino boy band SB19 have appeared in various visual media, appearing in - Would it be possible to avoid repeating the same verb? It reads a bit weird.
- Done: Replaced "appearing in" with "including"
- They debuted in 2018 with their debut single "Tilaluha" - Isn't it obvious that the single of their debut is going to be a debut single?
- Done: Looking back, yeah it actually is; removed "debut" from "debut single"
- The boy band released the music video for their third single "Alab (Burning)" in 2020 - The boy band released the music video for their third single, "Alab (Burning)", in 2020
- Done
- That year, the band released collaborative singles and music videos with other artists; they collaborated - I think : would work better than ; here.
- Done
- Since their debut, SB19 have been recurring performers at noontime variety shows, ASAP, It's Showtime, and All-Out Sundays - Something's missing to introduce the names of the shows. Maybe such as or somethhing similar?
- Done: Added "namely"; I think "such as" won't work since those three are not really examples, those three variety shows are the shows they frequently appear on.
- in the self-released online short film, Ex-Mas (2020), and the web series, Our Zone: Anniversary Series (2021) and School Buddies (2022) - Conversely, you need to lose the commas here: in the self-released online short film Ex-Mas (2020) and the web series Our Zone: Anniversary Series (2021) and School Buddies (2022)
- Done
- Three of the images have the same appeared in the music video. Can you phrase some of them in a different way?
- Done
- on a rooftop of a building - on the rooftop of a building
- Done
- The video video depicts
- Done: It's funny how I missed that. thanks for spotting!
- It is a vibrant Christmas-themed video - What does vibrant mean here?
- Done: Supposed to mean like its colorful, but then that reminded me of MOS:WTW, so I removed it.
- It is a grungy-themed video that depicts SB19 searching and mining gold, which then later depicted them dancing to the song's choreography in a large quarry - There's a mix of tenses here. The sentence could be reworked.
- Done: Split them into two sentences
That's what I saw. Kind regards, Alavense (talk) 05:38, 28 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, Alavense! Thanks for reviewing the list! I have addressed your comments. Let me know if you are satisfied with the changes, and if you have anything else, don't hesitate to leave another message. – Relayed (t • c) 10:34, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the changes. I also fixed a tipo, but all looks good now. Nice work. Support. Alavense (talk) 10:43, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for your support, Alavense! – Relayed (t • c) 13:15, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the changes. I also fixed a tipo, but all looks good now. Nice work. Support. Alavense (talk) 10:43, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Hi, Alavense! Thanks for reviewing the list! I have addressed your comments. Let me know if you are satisfied with the changes, and if you have anything else, don't hesitate to leave another message. – Relayed (t • c) 10:34, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 19:04, 31 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
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