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**Citran Jai** (born 1987), formerly known as Citran S/O Rathakrishnan, is a Singaporean Master Hypnotist and motivational speaker known for his work in human consciousness development and personal empowerment.

Jai received his certification as a Master Hypnotist from the National Guild of Hypnosis, USA, and is a member of the International Medical & Dental Hypnotherapy Association (IMDHA) [1][2]. He specializes in 5-path and 7-path self-hypnosis teaching, following the methodologies of Cal Banyan [3].

Additionally, Jai is certified in Neuro-Linguistic Programming (NLP) by the National Federation of Neuro Linguistics Programming, USA (NFNLP) [4].

He is the CEO and co-founder of Unlimited Success Group Pte Ltd, a company dedicated to fostering human consciousness development and providing tools for success and joy [5]. Through his unique course designs, Jai aims to create impactful and lasting changes in individuals' lives. Unlimited Success Group also does parenting workshops to groom the next generation into capable human beings with released potential with the help of their families.

Jai has conducted motivational courses for diverse audiences, including children, students, adults, teachers, and residents of the Singapore Boy’s Home [6]. In 2008, he has also collaborated with organizations such as the Rotary Club in the Philippines to empower underprivileged students and communities, notably in the Smokey Mountain area of Tondo, Manila [7]. Together with the Interact Club in Singapore, Jai contributed to the establishment of a candle factory in the area to provide sustainable livelihoods for its residents.

As the son of renowned Lightning Ratha, a former national and international boxer and SEA Games medalist, Jai has a background in athletics. He excelled as a national runner, setting records in the 2.4KM and 4.8KM competitions during his schooling years [8]. Under his father's guidance, Jai also received training in boxing since his younger days and continues to coach the sport in his free time to promote a healthy and active lifestyle.

Furthermore, Jai is an avid yoga practitioner, integrating yoga philosophy and practices into his holistic approach to personal development and well-being. [9]

Additionally, Citran Jai holds a blue belt in Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu and maintains a passion for martial arts [10].

Citran Jai is also a member of the Singapore Boxing Federation and is a certified National Referee & Judge. He is also a certified Professional Boxing Referee & Judge for the WBC Asia. [11]

**References:**

1. [National Guild of Hypnosis](https://www.ngh.net/)

2. [International Medical & Dental Hypnotherapy Association](https://imdha.com/)

3. [Cal Banyan](https://www.calbanyan.com/)

4. [National Federation of Neuro Linguistics Programming](https://www.nfnlp.com/)

5. [Unlimited Success Group Pte Ltd](http://www.unlimitedsuccess.com.sg/)

6. Courses conducted: Singapore Boy’s Home, https://www.ite.edu.sg/colleges/ite-college-east/about-college-east, https://sgindian.com/network/singapore-indian-association/, Harvest@Woodlands, Pulau Ubin: https://www.visitsingapore.com/see-do-singapore/nature-wildlife/singapore-islands/pulau-ubin/, https://unlimitedsuccessgroup.sg/gallery

7. Philanthropic work with Rotary Club https://rcmanila.org/

8. Athletic achievements: Woodlands Secondary School (2000 - 2004) https://www.woodlandssec.moe.edu.sg/

9. Isha Yoga Centre: https://isha.sadhguru.org/sg/en/inner-engineering

10. Martial arts involvement: Farrer Park Boxing Club, Evolve Mixed Martial Arts, https://www.gracieuniversity.com,UFC, Boxing Coach at Commonman Fight Club. Instagram: @commonmanfc

11. https://www.singapore-boxing.org/, https://www.asianboxingcouncil.com/