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What's the reason for putting Goodby and Silverstein on the same row in the infobox but everyone else on their own?
When I first read this article, I did not realize what "It was later replaced by..." meant until getting to that part in the article body. I think being clear and saying something like "It was later taken down and replaced by" might be good.
Video
"Viewers can pick up elements" - if the ad is no longer available as an interactive thing, then this should be in past tense
Are there any sources you can cite for this section, considering the ad no longer exists in its interactive form (and thus can't really be used as a source for this)
Reception
This is one long paragraph - readability would be helped a lot by splitting it into two.
"acros" should be "across"
Images
The non-free use rationale calls the screenshot "cover art".
Other comments
Although not strictly necessary to meet the GA criteria, I would strongly suggest adding alt text to the image for accessibility reasons.
Does an official non-interactive video upload of this exist? If so, it would be helpful to add an external link to it.
Notes sections typically go before references, as footnotes (even if that is not the case here) themselves may contain references.
Not a lot of problems with this one! I'll put the review on hold for seven days - @ me when you have addressed the issues above, or if you have any questions.--AlexandraIDV14:51, 1 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm hoping to potentially get it to Featured article status - or, failing that, merely get it to as good as it possibly can be. Mainly looking for prose suggestions and structural improvements.
I was honestly not expecting a topic like this to be an potential FAC. I think it's a great article, but it may be a deadend to "exemplify Wikipedia's very best work". TzarN64 (talk) 03:09, 1 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Wow, that’s a very very short featured article that I was not expecting. That gives me a lot more confidence that this Wario advertisement could potentially be a featured article one day. TzarN64 (talk) 18:22, 1 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]