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GA review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 01:20, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:51, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:51, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

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  • When young, he worked with his father as a stonecutter. -- "During his youth, he..."
  • He weighed at 170 pounds delete "at"
  • them also alongside his brother. add a comma after "them"
  • References: all are consistently formatted and appropriate for what is being cited
    • Spot checks: #3, 7, 11, 13, 17, 21, 22, 29, 30 all look good
      1. 8: You quote "fighter to the core" but the quote says "fighters" and is talking about both. Instead of a quote, I would paraphrase and say "noted that he was a natural fighter"

Nice work BeanieFan11! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:27, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination

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Carl Zoll, c. 1920
Carl Zoll, c. 1920
5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 3. Nominator has 310 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:52, 28 February 2025 (UTC).[reply]