Talk:Herman Martell

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Review: February 24, 2025. (Reviewed version).

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GA review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:15, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Herman Martell/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 03:57, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 17:09, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:09, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

You should link "1921 season", either to the Packers season article or the NFL one
After high school, Zoll started playing, I am assuming you mean "Martell" here
- Oops!
one as a starter, for the team that year. you can delete "for the team" as duplicative to an earlier phrase in that sentence
the season-finale, by a score I don't think season finale needs a dash and the comma isn't necessary
additionally starting in the --> including a start in the
which was held --> that was held
Martell played his third and last season for the Packers in 1921 as they joined the American Professional Football Association (APFA, now the National Football League), appearing in three non-league games, two as a starter,[4] as well as one APFA game, being a substitute against the Evansville Crimson Giants. split into two sentences
the Packers which ended his career. add a comma before "which"
and Martell served as a president of the organization. --> with Martell serving as a president of the organization.
You could say He succeeded Don Hutson as chief quarterback...
References:
- 1. 2 and 4 should have access-dates
- Spot checks: checked all sources, they all look good

Looks good BeanieFan11. Bummer, I was at the GB HoF last year and could have snapped a photo of his display. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:12, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:00, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:15, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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... that football player Herman Martell, who co-founded the alumni association for the Green Bay Packers, only appeared in one NFL game for the team?

Source: co-organizer; one game ("[Martell] played ... one game in the American Professional Football Association (now the NFL). Because [Martell] played in that one league game ... he is listed on our all-time roster and on most, if not all, all-time NFL rosters.")

Reviewed: to do
Comment: To do QPQ within 24 hours.

5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 311 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:33, 2 March 2025 (UTC).[reply]