Talk:2014 Pilger, Nebraska, tornado family/GA1

GA Review

Passed. E_F⁵ 17:11, 7 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Hoguert (talk · contribs) 13:38, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: EF5 (talk · contribs) 18:23, 3 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'll be reviewing this shortly! I have edited this before (heck, it's one of the most famous tornado events in history) but I personally don't think I've edited it enough to constitute significant involvement. Review coming in the next few days. :) E_F⁵ 18:23, 3 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

(Lead) $20.92 million $20.9 million in what year? E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed $20.92 million in 2014 USD Hoguert (talk) 20:20, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Meteorological setup) A {{citation needed}} tag is located at the end of this section; it needs addressed. E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Added the source Hoguert (talk) 20:21, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Meteorological setup) Link the first mention of Storm Prediction Center. E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Made the link Hoguert (talk) 20:22, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Tornado summary) This section should be renamed to "Tornado summaries" to account for the six tornadoes. E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed The section got renamed to the suggested name Hoguert (talk) 20:23, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Stanton tornado) The tornado traveled 12.21 miles This needs a {{convert}} template. E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Converted Hoguert (talk) 20:31, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Stanton tornado) inflicted $2.25 million in damages Again, $2.25 million in what year? E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed $2.25 million in 2014 USD, don't know if I should put it before "in damages" or after "in damages" Hoguert (talk) 20:32, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Pilger twin tornadoes) touched down 5.5 miles southwest This also needs a {{convert}} template. E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Converted Hoguert (talk) 20:33, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Pilger twin tornadoes) The entire first paragraph of this section is unreferenced, that needs fixed. E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Added the Damage Assessment Toolkit as the reference Hoguert (talk) 20:33, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Pilger twin tornadoes) I'd suggest making these paragraphs shorter by separating them into more paragraphs. E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Splited the paragraphs Hoguert (talk) 20:35, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Entire article) A script I have installed has found several duplicated citations, I have added a tag to the article that list them. This needs fixed. E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I think you made a slight mistake, it said 30, 32 had the ncdc.noaa.gov duplicated citations. But when I scrolled to see what 30, 32 were, they weren't ncdc.noaa.gov pages, I think you meant References 31, 33 Hoguert (talk) 20:44, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed I don't know I actually did remove the problem, but I removed the Wayne reference. As for the Meteorological section, I fixed the time from 1200 to 0600 UTC and added a new source to replace that Hoguert (talk) 20:59, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(Aftermath) After the tornado, the population for Pilger dropped by 31.8% from 352 people to 240. This needs a reference, and replace the "for Pilger" with "of Pilger". E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Added the source Hoguert (talk) 20:36, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Pinging @Hoguert:, apologies for the delay. :) E_F⁵ 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I've got, good job! I have an open tornado FAC, feel free to take a look. :) E_F⁵ 17:11, 7 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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