Talk:2014 Pilger, Nebraska, tornado family
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Nominator: Hoguert (talk · contribs) 13:38, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: EF5 (talk · contribs) 18:23, 3 February 2025 (UTC)
- Hi, I'll be reviewing this shortly! I have edited this before (heck, it's one of the most famous tornado events in history) but I personally don't think I've edited it enough to constitute significant involvement. Review coming in the next few days. :) EF5 18:23, 3 February 2025 (UTC)
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[edit]- (Lead)
$20.92 million
$20.9 million in what year? EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)- Fixed $20.92 million in 2014 USD Hoguert (talk) 20:20, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Meteorological setup) A {{citation needed}} tag is located at the end of this section; it needs addressed. EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed Added the source Hoguert (talk) 20:21, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Meteorological setup) Link the first mention of Storm Prediction Center. EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed Made the link Hoguert (talk) 20:22, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Tornado summary) This section should be renamed to "Tornado summaries" to account for the six tornadoes. EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed The section got renamed to the suggested name Hoguert (talk) 20:23, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Stanton tornado)
The tornado traveled 12.21 miles
This needs a {{convert}} template. EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)- Fixed Converted Hoguert (talk) 20:31, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Stanton tornado)
inflicted $2.25 million in damages
Again, $2.25 million in what year? EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)- Fixed $2.25 million in 2014 USD, don't know if I should put it before "in damages" or after "in damages" Hoguert (talk) 20:32, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Pilger twin tornadoes)
touched down 5.5 miles southwest
This also needs a {{convert}} template. EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)- Fixed Converted Hoguert (talk) 20:33, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Pilger twin tornadoes) The entire first paragraph of this section is unreferenced, that needs fixed. EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed Added the Damage Assessment Toolkit as the reference Hoguert (talk) 20:33, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Pilger twin tornadoes) I'd suggest making these paragraphs shorter by separating them into more paragraphs. EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed Splited the paragraphs Hoguert (talk) 20:35, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Entire article) A script I have installed has found several duplicated citations, I have added a tag to the article that list them. This needs fixed. EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- I think you made a slight mistake, it said 30, 32 had the ncdc.noaa.gov duplicated citations. But when I scrolled to see what 30, 32 were, they weren't ncdc.noaa.gov pages, I think you meant References 31, 33 Hoguert (talk) 20:44, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed I don't know I actually did remove the problem, but I removed the Wayne reference. As for the Meteorological section, I fixed the time from 1200 to 0600 UTC and added a new source to replace that Hoguert (talk) 20:59, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- (Aftermath)
After the tornado, the population for Pilger dropped by 31.8% from 352 people to 240.
This needs a reference, and replace the "for Pilger" with "of Pilger". EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)- Fixed Added the source Hoguert (talk) 20:36, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
Pinging @Hoguert:, apologies for the delay. :) EF5 20:15, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
- That's all I've got, good job! I have an open tornado FAC, feel free to take a look. :) EF5 17:11, 7 February 2025 (UTC)
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