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Comment: This comes across as highly promotional with text like "Bromell became a key figure in Australian music publishing", "Bromell was a highly active industry leader", and "His passing was marked by tributes from across the Australian music community, many recalling his generosity and his significant impact on local songwriters and performers".An encyclopedia article should be written in a neutral, dispassionate tone. There are also large chunks of text that is unsourced - where is that information from? The article cannot be accepted as it is. -- NotCharizard🗨09:30, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: Please consider how encyclopedic biographies are written. You could have a look at the biographies listed under WP:GA. Drmies (talk) 01:00, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: This comes across as highly promotional with text like "Bromell became a key figure in Australian music publishing", "Bromell was a highly active industry leader", and "His passing was marked by tributes from across the Australian music community, many recalling his generosity and his significant impact on local songwriters and performers".An encyclopedia article should be written in a neutral, dispassionate tone. There are also large chunks of text that is unsourced - where is that information from? The article cannot be accepted as it is. -- NotCharizard 🗨 09:30, 20 May 2025 (UTC)