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Meg White

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I've listed this article for peer review because since its previous one in 2014, it has been expanded drastically, many things have happened and since been added to the article with the best of my ability. I tried to remain as objective and informative as I could whilst providing information that I believed was useful/important to the article. It would be cool to get feedback!

Thank you, Watagwaan (talk) 03:51, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Arconning

Here are the comments I'd say from a thorough skim (quite the contrast). Arconning (talk) 12:58, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! I applied all of these except for "rockonthenet" because these were citations I got from the White Stripes' awards list, which is a Featured List, so I figured it was reviewed. Watagwaan (talk) 07:04, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The source in the lead citing White's birthday can be removed as it's already mentioned within the body. A better source could be provided as I've seen some more reliable sources citing her birthday.
"including "In the Cold, Cold Night"." Could be rewritten as "including in the song...".
The first mention of "The White Stripes" should be wikilinked.
I doubt "www.rockonthenet.com's" is a reliable source, this could be switched for something better.
On the Icky Thump tour, the bass drum head design was switched to a button inspired by the Pearlies clothing Jack and Meg wore for the album cover. She also used Remo and Ludwig drumheads, various percussion instruments and Vater drumsticks., unsourced.
White's Pearl Export bass drum—complete with original peppermint-painted bass drum that she used with the band's first show—and the Pearly Queen outfit she wore in the photos for the Icky Thump album, were featured in the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame "Women Who Rock" exhibition., source should be fixed to a live one (or an archived version of the citation).
incredible hulk,, sic?
Wikipedia:Citation overkill in "Personal life" and "Accolades and achievements"?