Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Ochaco Uraraka/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was archived by Gog the Mild via FACBot (talk) 18 March 2025 [1].
- Nominator(s): Z. Patterson (talk) 21:14, 17 March 2025 (UTC)
This article is about the character and her conception, appearances, characterisation, and reception. Z. Patterson (talk) 21:14, 17 March 2025 (UTC)
- sorry, but I’m going to have to oppose this, which isn’t something I like to do. It’s obviously be written by a fan of the character, but that means for someone who has never come across this before, it’s incomprehensible in places because of the in-universe terminology. “Ochaco's Quirk is Zero Gravity” is one example (and are all the capitals needed?) The body starts badly, with no explanation of the basics of who this character is or what the fictional universe is. The language is awkward in places (starting a sentence with “however”, linguistic tics like “in addition” and a pointless quote ("interesting and fun"). Sorry, but this needs a rewrite before it can be properly considered. - SchroCat (talk) 21:32, 17 March 2025 (UTC)
- Sadly, I agree, and so am going to archive this. I suggest putting the article through GOCE, PR, GAN and then PR again before bringing it back to FAC. I would also commend to the nominator the advice in the instructions about having a mentor for their first nomination. The usual two-week hiatus will apply. Gog the Mild (talk) 14:06, 18 March 2025 (UTC)
- Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Gog the Mild (talk) 14:06, 18 March 2025 (UTC)
- @SchroCat and Gog the Mild: I created a to do list on the talk page and I plan to address the issues accordingly. Z. Patterson (talk) 20:34, 18 March 2025 (UTC)
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.