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G'day Niasoh. I had a look at Ziaur Rahman with a view to reviewing it as a Good Article, but if I did I am afraid it would be quick-failed on a number of grounds, and I suspect any other experienced reviewer would do likewise. That may be why it has been left unreviewed for so many months. I suggest you withdraw it (see WP:GAN/I#N3) so that you can work on it some more. Here are some observations on areas in which it falls short of the GA criteria at present:

The lead is extensively footnoted. In general terms, except for controversial matters likely to be challenged, citations should not be needed in the lead as everything in the lead should be covered in more detail and properly footnoted in the body. For more on this see MOS:CITELEAD.
The grammar and punctuation needs some work. I strongly suggest asking the Guild of Copy Editors to take a look. You can do that here WP:GOCE/REQ.
There are quite a few uncited paragraphs. See Wikipedia:GACR6 criteria 2b.
The ribbons in the Legacy etc section are really not terribly encyclopaedic, better to insert the awards in text only at the chronological point where he was awarded them.
I'm not sure the photos are all needed. I haven't checked their copyright status and licensing, but in general terms, use photographs to illustrate different periods of his life/career. For example, the infobox photo and the speech photo are essentially redundant, as he looks and is dressed in a very similar way in both. I'm not sure the photograph of his car is useful, and there are others where the purpose isn't clear.
Finally, there is a strong similarity between the article text and this blog which creates concerns about plagiarism or copyright infractions, which you will need to deal with.

Good luck with it, you have clearly put a lot of effort into it already, and while more needs to be done, you have the basis of a good article about an important figure. All the best, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:20, 15 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GOCE Requests

On the GOCE Requests page, you can only have a maximum of two requests at a time. You have to get rid of any two of your four requests first. Once at least one of your remaining requests is completed, then you add the other ones. Mox Eden (talk) 15:56, 15 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Done, Thanks for letting me know. Niasoh ❯❯❯ Wanna chat? 17:47, 15 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]