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East Bay, viewed from the Forth Rail Bridge,September 2011

Pingot Quarry waterfall

I will respect your authoritah!

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Please add Oliver Joseph Lacy[1] to the List of solved missing person cases. Davidgoodheart (talk) 20:22, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Please add Konerak Sinthasomphone[2] to the List of solved missing person cases. Davidgoodheart (talk) 19:38, 26 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Please add Murders of Harold and Joey Pugh[3] to the List of solved missing person cases. Davidgoodheart (talk) 20:33, 28 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Please add Murders of Greg and Kimberly Malnory[4][5] to the List of solved missing person cases as they had disappeared for a day before being found dead. Davidgoodheart (talk) 00:50, 31 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  1. ^ Masters, Brian (1993). The Shrine of Jeffrey Dahmer. London, England: Hodder & Stoughton. ISBN 978-0-340-59194-9.Masters, Brian (1993). The Shrine of Jeffrey Dahmer. London, England: Hodder & Stoughton. ISBN 978-0-340-59194-9.
  2. ^ Masters, Brian (1993). The Shrine of Jeffrey Dahmer. London, England: Hodder & Stoughton. ISBN 978-0-340-59194-9.
  3. ^ Maxwell v. State [2000], Alabama Court of Criminal Appeals (United States).
  4. ^ "Man held in slaying of couple". Sarasota Herald-Tribune. April 18, 1997.
  5. ^ "36-year-old Arcadia man is arrested in connection with couple's deaths". Sarasota Herald-Tribune. April 18, 1997.

Hello! I saw your recent edit [1] but I think it might not be grammatically correct, so maybe double check. I may be wrong though. Cheers! x RozuRozu teacups 22:58, 28 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, XRozuRozu. Thanks for your message. Maybe it is just me, but "when being the victim of the act of murder" does not gel well with me (especially the snippet "being the victim" as it almost radiates a theatrical impression). Bear in mind I'm a Limey, or redcoat, so "it's a good job" people point these things out. :) How about "subjected to the act of murder"?--Kieronoldham (talk) 23:15, 28 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I meant that changing it to "when the recipient of the act of murder" does not make it a complete sentence. I think you meant "being the recipient"?
However, now that you mention it, I think "subjected" is more concise. x RozuRozu teacups 23:21, 28 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Tweaked the sentence. Thanks again Moira. :) Also thanks for your kudos in recent weeks. Key. :) --Kieronoldham (talk) 23:24, 28 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No problem! :) x RozuRozu teacups 23:29, 28 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]