User talk:Aaliyahyue
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[edit]Quite a few problems. Please read the guidance below:
- When you write about a person, you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.
- Most of your text was unreferenced, you must reference anything you claim about a living person. Your references yopu did give were to low quality sources such as galleries displaying her work, which are unlikely to be objective. Chagall & Chagall: The Artworks of Chen Haiyan appears to be a book or a catalogue, please provide isbn numbers or page ranges if appropriate. Why have you not used reputable sources such as The British Museum?
- The British Museum page suggests that she meets our notability criteria, but there is little else in what you wrote to suggest that. She has won awards, listed on chinesenewart, again, no mention.
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- Much of your text was commentary on her work rather than real objective facts thereby integrating the fleeting, intensely private, and fantastical world of her dreams into the fabric of modern China's rapidly evolving social reality and similar. We want facts, not opinions
- There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
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- I didn't check
You need lots more wikilinks, eg Fushun, Liaoning, printmaking
Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 13:41, 10 March 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Meena Park (April 3)
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