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Declined by Bobby Cohn 20 days ago. Last edited by Bobby Cohn 20 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: Based on the phrasing and extensive missing sourcing, I believe there is also an extensive WP:OR issue here as well. Bobby Cohn (talk) 18:29, 11 April 2025 (UTC)

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