Template:Did you know nominations/Gianni Benvenuti
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Tarlby talk 04:54, 21 March 2025 (UTC)
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Gianni Benvenuti
- ... that Italian artist Gianni Benvenuti, known for his children's book illustrations, also had a diverse career as a painter, sculptor, and printmaker?
- Source: InCollect: :In the 1950s, he became a celebrated illustrator of children’s books" and Q Arts Magazine"... this formidable artist mastered painting, sculpture, printmaking, illustration and cartooning and became internationally renowned."
- ALT1: ... that Gianni Benvenuti, known for his children’s book illustrations, studied architecture at the University of Milan? Source: Same as above, for children's book illustrator, plus InCollect: "There [Milan], he graduated from the Vittorio Veneto Scientific Lyceum and pursued studies in architecture at the University of Milan. His diverse interests and academic background laid the foundation for a lifelong devotion to the visual arts."
- ALT2: ... that children's book illustrator, Gianni Benvenuti, opened a design studio and art gallery in Philadelphia in 1981? Source: Same as above for children's book illustrator, plus InCollect: "In the U.S., Benvenuti and his wife, artist Elfie Harris, founded Harris Benvenuti Inc., a design studio that also served as a showcase for their art. Their Philadelphia-based studio.." 47arts: ..."when we bought it in 1981." -- Elfie Harris, Benventi's wife
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- Comment: Benvenuti's children's book illustrations are beautiful. While they are out of print, many of his books can be found on used book sites, and pieces of his art can be found on auction sites. Unfortunately, his work is not yet in the public domain.
— ERcheck (talk) 06:54, 15 March 2025 (UTC).
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The article contains some instances of non-neutral language, and while the sourcing is generally strong, some citations rely on primary sources, which should be used with caution. There are no indications of plagiarism.
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Overall: @ERcheck:
The DYK nomination is well-supported with factual information and citations, but the original article requires further improvement. If you can address the issues I mentioned, we could consider submitting it for a DYK nomination on the main page. Perfect. Last suggestion is looking into the Medium link, since it is unanimously considered an unreliable source. 🐝 B33net 🐝
- @ERcheck: You've improved the neutrality of the article. I suggest you check the sourcing now and make sure there is no primary sources, and if there is with intention to keep them, that they are properly backed up by secondary sources. Thanks for your contributions! 🐝 B33net 🐝 9:46, 16 March 2025 (UTC)