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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 22:47, 7 May 2025 (UTC)

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Camellia (musician)

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  • ... that Camellia described himself as "the engine" of Exit Tunes for consistently producing 100 fast-paced songs per year?
Moved to mainspace by Cathodography (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

Cattos💭 00:37, 2 April 2025 (UTC).

  • Not a review, but a new hook angle or rewording may be needed here as the hook as currently written may be confusing or uninteresting to those unfamiliar with Exit Tunes. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:22, 2 April 2025 (UTC)


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Vgmdb looks like a user-generated source. Earwig does not bring up hits. Passed. AlphaBetaGamma (Talk/report any mistakes here) 03:49, 5 April 2025 (UTC)

@AlphaBetaGamma: I've removed the Vgmdb source and replaced it with two other sources. WP:ABOUTSELF should apply. I agree the original hook could be clearer for general readers. Though I'm not very good at rehooking stuff, I suggest ALT0A: ... that Camellia described himself as "the engine" of the record label Exit Tunes, citing his consistent production of 100 fast-paced songs annually?
If that still doesn't work, I propose a potential new hook ALT1: ... that Japanese electronic musician Camellia began producing music at the age of ten using his mother's computer, after a friend asked him to compose a theme song? [1] Cattos💭 12:42, 5 April 2025 (UTC)
I personally think ALT1 works, but NLH5 made a shorter version that would be more simple. Personally I feel that the theme song part isn't that unique or interesting, not too sure about how others feel about that fact. ALT1a:... that Japanese electronic musician Camellia began producing music at the age of ten using his mother's computer?
Let me know what you think of that, thanks. AlphaBetaGamma (Talk/report any mistakes here) 00:07, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
@AlphaBetaGamma: I'm personally fine with your shortened ALT1a hook. What is the result of this nomination? Cattos💭 05:18, 6 April 2025 (UTC)
Forgot to mention it here, as I wrote above I have passed the hook. AlphaBetaGamma (Talk/report any mistakes here) 07:16, 11 April 2025 (UTC)
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