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Abanti Sithi
- ... that Abanti Sithi was honored with the title "Shispriya" for her exceptional whistling skills, along with performing the cup song and creating unique musical instruments using plastic cups, foil paper, and metal coins?
- Reviewed:
Created by BadhonCR (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
BadhonCR (talk) 08:16, 2 April 2025 (UTC).
- General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
- It is right on the borderline, with 1,498 characters (256 words) of prose. Add another sentence or two to the article and it will clear this.
Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- It seems like there is a single sentence copied from a source (Earwig result). This should be rewritten.
Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Interesting:
- Other problems:
- The hook is a bit too long and stuffed with details to immediately grab the reader. I'd recommend trimming everything after "her exceptional whistling skills" so it's more concise. Also, it'd be worth translating the title "Shispriya" as "Whistle Queen" for the hook, just so the average reader fully understands what this title means.
QPQ: None required. |
Overall: The article is new, fully-sourced and neutral, but it needs a bit more prose to be considered long enough and it has one sentence that was copied from a source. The hook could also be trimmed down for concision, rather than stuffing with too much detail, so it grabs the reader quicker. The nomination needs work, but I think it could be approved with a bit of tweaking to the hook and article. Grnrchst (talk) 12:47, 10 April 2025 (UTC)