Talk:Victorious 2.0: More Music from the Hit TV Show/GA1

GA review

Passed. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 02:25, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Shoot for the Stars (talk · contribs) 06:06, 15 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 13:11, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, well done for your work on this article so far! It looks good. I have the following comments:

1.) Background - "The extended play was subsequently released for digital download and for physical release in Australia on November 9, 2012." - Could you please change "for physical release"? I do not think it is correct wording

Changed

2.) Music and composition - "The extended play opens with "Make It in America", an upbeat pop " - "upbeat" seems opinionated - could this be removed or reworked?

This source states it's upbeat.

3.) Music and composition - "Countdown" is an upbeat pop track that features Justice and Leon Thomas III on vocals." - Same as above

This source says it is upbeat.

4.) Music and composition - "The extended play closes with a cover version of Simple Minds 1985 number one single "Don't You (Forget About Me)"" - Can you please say who sings this?

Added

5.) Music and composition - A lot of the statements here are sourced to reviews and there seems to be a lot of opinions here presented as facts - they could do with additional source supporting the statements

When it comes to lyrics, genre, and tempo, I add what the sources say about the song.

6.) Promotion - "The song was certified platinum in the United States" - Could you please clarify or briefly explain what this means? Perhaps you could link Music recording certification?

Linked it to Music recording certification

7.) Promotion - There is any info about the extended play as a whole... Could you please try to find some?

Changed the heading to "Singles" as I could not find any reliable sources talking about promoting it.

8.) Reception - "opining that Justice's "commanding vocals are the main attraction here"." - This needs a ref at the end of the sentence

Done

9.) Reception - "Outside the United States" - This needs "of" in between the first two words

Done

10.) Reception - there is not a lot of critical reception here, could you please try to find some more? There may be some info in the archives?

Added.

11.) Charts - I would recommend adding a separate column for the refs

Not sure how to do this.

12.) Pictures - I would recommend adding a free image of Justice in the article so that it satisfies the GA criteria

Added

13.) Lead - "The album was released on June 5, 2012 by Nickelodeon Records, in association with Columbia." - I cannot find the second bit mentioned anywhere in the main article?

Added

14.) Lead - "Victorious 2.0: More Music from the Hit TV Show was supported by two singles" - What does this mean?

Changed

15.) Perhaps the biggest one - there are not a lot of sources discussing the extended play as a whole or giving info on it other than basic info like the artists. There is not much behind-the-scenes info e.g. who wrote the songs, if there were any hurdles in the development, if there was any criticism etc. Could you please try to find some more info and sources to add in the article? I think it would strengthen the article.

Added the sources I could find for the article.

When these have been addressed please let me know :) Please don't hesitate to ask any questions or for assistance! DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 13:11, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for the review DaniloDaysOfOurLives. I have addressed your comments. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 23:58, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, thank you for your changes - they are really good! I added a couple of things, I hope that was okay. I have spotchecked Sources #3, #4, #9, #32, #41 and #45. I am passing this, well done! DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 02:24, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.