Talk:Tulare labor camps rent strike

Tulare labor camps rent strike was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (January 20, 2025, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Nice work

North8000 (talk) 20:36, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

Unsuccessful. Spookyaki (talk) 05:56, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tulare labor camps rent strike/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: LoomCreek (talk · contribs) 00:06, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Spookyaki (talk · contribs) 05:55, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I'll be reviewing this.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Firstly, I'd like to sincerely thank you for your work on an NFWA/UFW-related article! This is an important area of study, and I'm glad you're working on it. I'm actually currently working on Dolores Huerta's article right now. That said, I think I am going to have to fail this article for now. Some broad-strokes notes:

The article could use a comprehensive copyedit. I would recommend listing it on the Guild of Copy Editors request page.
The citations also need to be cleaned up. I clearly see some repeat citations, such as Ganz, and some misspellings as well.
Per MOS:ORDER, "Further reading" should go after "Notes" and "References".
I think the article relies a bit too heavily on primary and self-published sources. This applies to El Malcriado, letters and other publications from Drake and Padilla, and to a lesser extent Ganz and the SNCC. I'm not saying you absolutely should not use these sources, and I think that using them for attributed quotes is fine, but they should be used judiciously. Taken together, I think the current collection of sources for this article might be both an original research and NPOV issue.
Conversely, I think the article perhaps underrelies on Garcia, which has a decent-sized section on the strike (pp. 33-35). Some other possible sources include:
- Bardacke, Frank (2011). Trampling out the Vintage: Cesar Chavez and the Two Souls of the United Farm Workers. London; New York: Verso. pp. 141–143. ISBN 1-84467-718-4. OCLC 668194738.
- Kohl-Arenas, Erica (October 2, 2014). "Will the Revolution be Funded? Resource Mobilization and the California Farm Worker Movement". Social Movement Studies. 13 (4): 494. doi:10.1080/14742837.2013.863727. ISSN 1474-2837.
- Pawel, Miriam (2014). The Crusades of Cesar Chavez: a Biography. New York: Bloomsbury Press. p. 102. ISBN 1-60819-710-7. OCLC 849210456.

If you need help accessing any of these resources, feel free to Wikimail me or ask on the Resource Request Board.

Are you certain that the excerpt from The Land is Rich is public domain? It seems like the documentary is available for purchase/rent on various platforms, and I see no indication from its publisher, Estuary Press, that it is public domain. If you have questions about copyright, you can ask at Commons:Village pump.
I don't think you need to add the quote attribution in the blockquote for quotes that are attributed in-paragraph.

Again, thank you for your hard work on this article. Please feel free to resubmit once these issues have been addressed. There's definitely a strong article here, it just needs some adjustments. Spookyaki (talk) 05:55, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.