Talk:The Korea Daily News/GA1
GA Review
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Nominator: Seefooddiet (talk · contribs) 23:00, 24 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:46, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
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A few copy changes to take a look at, but that's about all. Solid article. Ping me when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her · t · c) 04:58, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
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Copy changes
[edit]- The newspaper was sold after Bethell's death in 1909, and became Remove comma (WP:CINS)
- However, Cowen was secretly supportive of Japan, and unbenownst to Bethell, Correct some comma and spelling errors. However, Cowen was secretly supportive of Japan and, unbeknownst to Bethell,
- Try "left for Japan" not "left to Japan"
- Three straight paragraphs start with a date: "On 21 February 1907", "On 23 May 1907", "In 1907". Consider reshuffling a sentence to improve variety of paragraph starts.
- Bethell eventually won his second trial at the British Supreme Court for China in December 1908, and defiantly immediately returned to continue reporting. Remove comma (CINS)
- The paper stopped publishing in English, and Remove comma CINS
Sourcing and spot checks
[edit]I reviewed 1, 5, and 6. No issues found. The largest Earwig text issue is the attributed blockquote.
Images
[edit]The two newspaper scans are public domain. Normally, I'd suggest adding alt text, but here the only workable alt text is "Refer to caption".
Discussion
[edit]- @Sammi Brie: Hi, thank you for the review! I think I did everything you suggested. seefooddiet (talk) 05:06, 30 January 2025 (UTC)