Talk:Swimming at the 2024 Summer Olympics – Women's 200-metre butterfly
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Repeating error in Shedule section
[edit]There is a repeating error in all the articles on the 2024 Olympics swimming in the Schedule section. The links to the sources are dead or missing, and the start times indicated are the same: 10:00 - 19:37 - 17:30 -- Karavadgoo (talk) 11:12, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
- I think all this is fixed. IAWW (talk) 21:05, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
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Nominator: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 00:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 22:35, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
Hi, I will review this article. -Riley1012 (talk) 22:35, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
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1. Well-written
- ...and in the semifinals Denmark's Helena Rosendahl Bach broke her nation's record... Add a comma after "semifinals".
- In the final, Zhang took an early lead, but was overtaken by McIntosh... Remove the comma after "lead".
- 20 year old Elizabeth Dekkers from Australia was the 2023 World Championships silver medallist and was also on a positive improvement trajectory. Spell out "Twenty" to avoid beginning a sentence with a numeral per MOS:NUMERAL.
- Zhang qualified as top seed, swimming 2:06:55... This should say as the top seed.
- McIntosh qualified with the fastest seed of 2:04.87... This should either be qualified with the fastest time or qualified as the top seed.
- At 65 m, Zhang had extended her lead to 0.50, but by 100 m McIntosh... You should write out metres here for consistency with the rest of the paragraph.
2. Verifiable
The article uses reliable sources that are listed properly in the References section without major missing information. Passes Earwig's (the 23.1% similarity is from a properly-attributed quote). Spot check: 1, 3, 9, 11, 13, 19, and 20 are all good.
3. Broad
All the major aspects of the event are covered without going into unnecessary detail.
4. Neutral
The article is neutral in its tone and properly attributes opinions.
5. Stable
I looked at the talk page and article history to verify that there are no ongoing content disputes.
6. Illustrated
The image of the arena is in the public domain under CC0 license, is relevant to the event, and has a suitable caption.
Okay It is a wonderful world, I am done with the review. My suggested changes are pretty minor. -Riley1012 (talk) 18:35, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you very much @Riley1012, I have fixed your concerns which were all very helpful. IAWW (talk) 19:21, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks for your quick response! -Riley1012 (talk) 21:47, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
Excessive redundant filler detail in lead
[edit]No Olympic event ever talks about how big an Olympic pool is. That belongs in the general article. This is a specific event and not one to explain the rules to others. So unnecessary detail removed from lead in line with MOS:LEDE. Issue has already been discussed and agreed: Talk:Swimming at the 2024 Summer Olympics – Women's 100 metre freestyle#top. More info: User:IP49XX/Why MOS Matters. IP49XX (talk) 03:35, 13 May 2025 (UTC)
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