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January 28, 2025Guild of Copy EditorsCopyedited
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on November 15, 2024.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that at the 2024 Democratic National Convention, vice presidential nominee Tim Walz was booed for visiting the "wrong" Pennsylvanian gas station chain?

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Sheetz–Wawa rivalry/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Dan Leonard (talk · contribs) 15:52, 14 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Pbritti (talk · contribs) 20:35, 22 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hey, this is Pbritti! I'm a Coloradan who's lived in Virginia for a few years, but Wawa, Sheetz, and Pennsylvania are all things I'm quite familiar with! I'll provide an in-depth review soon. Please feel welcome to reply wherever you like below or on ping me on my talk page. Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 20:35, 22 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Initial review

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Ok, getting started on the review.

  • Sourcing looks to come exclusively from RSs. Will compare citations to content of the sources, but they are all the right thing to see in this sort of article.
  • Some material in the lead are not in the body of the article and aren't sourced. We don't have cited statements about locations many aspects of the rivalry itself. I'll list those in a later comment.
  • Sheetz stores are mostly located This sentence in the lead is unreferenced and has no supporting statement in the main text.
  • Sheetz and Wawa have historically limited their operations to their respective regions What are these regions?
  • same intersection in Phoenixville in southeastern Pennsylvania What is this example pulled out into its own sentence?
  • The Spectator described Sheetz as having a "cultural hegemony" Please instead credit the author of the piece.
  • Philadelphia magazine called a "cult-like customer devotion" Please instead credit the author of the piece.
  • Broadly speaking, I worry that the article is not comprehensive. For example, there is no mention of a documentary on the subject.

I will do a source-to-text comparison next. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:00, 27 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]