Talk:Selayar whistler/GA1
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Nominator: AryKun (talk · contribs) 15:51, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 21:51, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewing now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 21:51, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
- We have a couple of photos of a skin in Commons: [1]. Better than no photo I would say.
- Added.
- Perhaps have a "Weblinks" section linking to two or three good photographs? And maybe a link to the song, too? Macaulay library should have options. It would be a nice service to the reader, and I was requested to do that the last time I had a bird at FAC, and it's a nice thing.
- Added.
- The map in Selayar Island would be nice to include, too.
- No objection to adding it, but I can't figure out how to convert the pushpin map parameters from that infobox into a location map template.
- and pinkish underparts, and brownish-olive tail and wing feathers. – remove first "and"
- Done.
- The similar appearances of the sexes in this species helps differentiate it from the rusty-breasted whistler; in that species, males have black-and-yellow plumage, contrasting with the female's olive-brown colouration.
- a large complex – link or explain "complex"? Species complex? But was it really one at the time, as it was thought to be just one species?
- Changed to species complex and linked. I don't think it's incorrect to describe it as a complex, even if it wasn't contemporaneously considered one.
- link "songbird trade" to "wildlife trade"? --Jens Lallensack (talk) 22:52, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
- Done.
- Jens Lallensack, I'm not sure whether you meant to add another comment, but I've responded to all the comments besides the dimorphism quote. AryKun (talk) 01:47, 29 January 2025 (UTC)
- AryKun, I made a change regarding the species complex (which I think is incorrect in that sentence) and added a different map. Please revert what you don't like. Promoting now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 01:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.