Talk:Robert Pattinson/GA1
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Nominator: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 13:45, 22 February 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: EF5 (talk · contribs) 13:50, 24 February 2025 (UTC)
- Hi, I'll be reviewing this shortly as part of WP:GARC. :) EF5 13:50, 24 February 2025 (UTC)
- Great thanks 750h+ 14:19, 24 February 2025 (UTC)
- GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- $4.6 billion in the lede is adjusted for what year? Is it current? Same for all twenty-one other monetary amounts, which can be found by ctrl + g'ing "$".
- this year, as explained below. what films gross generally doesn't have the inflation template.
- $4.6 billion in the lede is adjusted for what year? Is it current? Same for all twenty-one other monetary amounts, which can be found by ctrl + g'ing "$".
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
- a (reference section):
b (inline citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Reference [209] (Far Out) is flagged as unreliable. Besides that, references look good. Earwig finds several high-paraphrased sources in the 15%–25% range, although it then decided to have a spasm and fail to load so I'll get a 2O on paraphrasing.
- removed the Far Out reference, others do the job
- a (reference section):
- Copyvios seem to be mostly quotes and movie names so it looks fine. EF5 16:38, 2 March 2025 (UTC)
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- I have previously had an issue with another high-visibility article I reviewed, so I put some extra thought into comprehensiveness. While the monthly pageviews are over 200,000, a lack of editing the page and length shows that the article covers the main aspects of his life and career.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- No issues here.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- As above, high pageview amount. While the article is protected, this protection was enacted in 2020, making it over four years old. I have seen no recent edit warring or content disputes and the only recent significant changes were additions to prose just prior to the GAN by the nominator.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- File:Twilight cast imprints at Grauman's Chinese Theater.jpg and File:MJK34346 Robert Pattinson (The Lost City Of Z, Berlinale 2017).jpg need alt texts per MOS:ALT and general consistency with other images.
- done.
- File:Twilight cast imprints at Grauman's Chinese Theater.jpg and File:MJK34346 Robert Pattinson (The Lost City Of Z, Berlinale 2017).jpg need alt texts per MOS:ALT and general consistency with other images.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- There are a few issues, but none that are hard to fix. Pinging @750h+: for fixes, apologies for the delay. EF5 16:30, 2 March 2025 (UTC)
- @EF5: all done. i'll get to reviewing your article soon. thanks for the review. 750h+ 16:43, 2 March 2025 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
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