Talk:Re-Logic/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:25, 13 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Nannoyani (talk · contribs) 17:55, 21 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi again, I'm going to review this article as well. Nannoyani (talk) 17:55, 21 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

It was founded by Andrew Spinks in 2011. The company... → Founded by Andrew Spinks in 2011, the company... - Better to not have a choppy, short sentence.

...for developing and publishing Terraria, a 2D action-adventure sandbox video game, in 2011. → ...for developing and publishing the 2D action-adventure sandbox video game Terraria. - Smoother phrasing and unnecessary date removal.

...however, the game was canceled due to them not being satisfied with its development. → ...but the game was canceled because Re-Logic was not satisfied with its development progress. - Improve clarity.

TBA