Talk:Old Hatfield

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This is a very poorly written article throughout. The historical narrative is written in a present tense rather than past tense, and reads like tabloid journalism. Sentences are poorly constructed, with separate ideas being merged into the same sentence, joined by 'apologetic' commas.

Suggest it be rewritten from scratch. 109.148.85.44 (talk) 06:12, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]