Talk:No Body, No Crime/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 11:20, 10 January 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Locust member (talk · contribs) 17:24, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

Hey!! I'll be taking this one. I have two GANs and one other review going on right now so sorry if I don't review this one as quickly as I usually try to. Will still get this done ASAP tho!! Locust member (talk) 17:24, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

Thank you! No rush, please take your time. I'm also looking forward to reviewing more of your GANs very soon since you have so many and I appreciate your work :)) Medxvo (talk) 17:38, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Well Written

• Long Pond could be added to infobox.
  • Done.

• Maybe a nitpick but I would remove the comma after "Swift" in the first sentence of the lead.
  • Done.

• In the sentence starting with Some publications compared the composition, I would place the references after the mention. For example, after "Before He Cheats (2006)," I would add the Slate source, etc.
  • There are some sources that agreed on the same songs; Vulture agreed with Slate on "Before He Cheats" and with Billboard on "Goodbye Earl", and they additionally added "Independence Day" and Miranda Lambert's music influences, so I put the three sources together to indicate that there is some form of consensus for some of the songs, but let me know if I should change this.
    • Ah, makes sense. My apologies!

• You could mention the Este character is named after Este Haim, verified by The List
  • I was thinking about adding this while writing the article but isn't this a bit superfluous? I think it would be clear to a reader that it was inspired by/named after Este Haim since we mentioned her name in the background and production section, it's a bit trivial in my opinion...
    • I wouldn't say it was trivial? " The narrative revolves around a woman named Este, named after Este Haim, who confronts her cheating husband and is subsequently murdered." I feel like would read decently well? Lemme know if you still disagree.
      • That's a good suggestion, added. I'll leave the Entertainment Weekly source as it is without adding The List source since both support this information

• Swift's songwriting not as strong as on her past songs about revenge. - the "on" here sounds a bit out of place.
  • I think "on" makes sense. "Swift's song not as strong as her past songs" / "Swift's songwriting not as strong as on her past songs", I think there is a difference, as we usually say "her songwriting on the track". Please correct me if I'm mistaken.
    • Understandable

Factually accurate and verifiable

• Most sources appear reliable per WP:RSP and/or WP:A/S. Y

• Riff Magazine has a large editorial team and staff. Y

• Slovakia [41] shows the current chart, not from when this song charted.
  • There is a note in the citation that says "Note: Select 9. týden 2021 in the date selector".
    • Ahh, I see.

Spot check

• [10] Y
• [12] Y
• [15] Y
• [21] Y

Broad

• Has all of the standard songs stuff and does not veer off topic. Y

Neutral point of view

• Y

Stable

• No edit wars or disputes within the past 14 days. Y

Illustrated

• Cover art has fair use rationale and contains ALT text. Performance image has been reviewed and has correct licensing. Y

Overall

• I have not finished my review yet, but this is what I have got so far. Will try to get this done by Friday!
• @Medxvo: Nice job as always with this article; this was definitely my favorite from you yet, a very fun read. I will put this  On hold for now !!

  @Locust member: Thanks a lot for the very kind words, I truly appreciate it. I really enjoyed writing the article, and I'm very pleased you enjoyed reading it as well :))) I've addressed/responded to your points, and thanks again for the review! Medxvo (talk) 01:55, 1 February 2025 (UTC)

Absolutely!! I responded to all and still have one that needs further discussion, but the rest looks great :-) Locust member (talk) 02:15, 1 February 2025 (UTC)

Replied there, all should be done now! :)) Medxvo (talk) 02:28, 1 February 2025 (UTC)

All looks good now! Happy to ✓ Pass this one, congrats !! Locust member (talk) 02:32, 1 February 2025 (UTC)