Talk:Last Forever/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:00, 19 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 18:33, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 23:41, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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The copy changes are mostly minor, except you have some uncited material (maybe added since this page went to GAN), and I'd like to see the Reception section redone completely. Ping when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:40, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Looking good so far and looking forward to see your Reception section rework. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:30, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I can hopefully have this done in the next day or so, however reception is arguably the thing I struggle the most at. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 09:31, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Sammi Brie: I think the changes I made should be sufficient Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:31, 18 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This structure is a lot better. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:23, 19 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

Lead

Comma in first sentence is unnecessary and can go (WP:CINS) Done
The episode, written by series creators Carter Bays and Craig Thomas and directed by Pamela Fryman. Incomplete sentence.
"series's" per MOS:'S Done

Plot

Any context on "the blue French horn"? I never watched the series, and it's not mentioned anywhere else on this page. Done

Production

Additionally the season 7 episode "Tailgate " featured a headstone reading "Mother". Which Screen Rant's Kara Hedash attributed to being for The Mother.
- Combine sentences. Done
- Uncited. Done
Other cut scenes feature Robin, wearing her Robin Sparkles jeans jacket over her wedding dress, singing "Let's Go to the Mall" (2007) with the Mother's band at the wedding reception, and a montage showing Tracy's funeral. Change "and a montage" to "as well as a montage" to help the comma hierarchy not get lost. Done
It did not contain any new footage, but is edited Remove comma CINS Done

Reception

Restructure to be more holistic instead of segmented by author/commentator. See Wikipedia:Copyediting reception sections. There's little integration of the commonalities between each commentator.
Reduce quote use. The quotes are too long.

Sourcing and spot checks

The Metro source is unreliable and should be removed. Done
I am fine with the Reddit AMA used for Saget's own words.
Reviewed: 13, 16, 27, 29, 38. No issues.

Images

The screencap has an NFUR and alt text. Are there any images of the actors or the producers that could spice up the rest of the article as is common for a TV episode? Done

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