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Review

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Erinroddy, good start! You had a ton of useful info, but needed a significant overhaul. View your page's history to see the edits I made.

  • The draft needs to be in the form of a ready-to-go article, so I moved your notes below.
  • I also added a table and formatted the years into multi-column lists.
  • I correctly inserted your citations.

I might've made some mistakes in all of this, so please carefully review the correctness placement of the citations and whether the annual info is correct. Once you've done so, proceed to mainspace according to the syllabus. -Reagle (talk) 18:05, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  1. ^ a b "Kilby Court Block Party: Fans come to Utah from all over for the music". The Salt Lake Tribune. Retrieved 2025-01-28.
  2. ^ a b "'Dream line-up': Kilby Block Party celebrates 25 years of beloved music venue". ABC4 Utah. 2024-05-07. Retrieved 2025-01-28.
  3. ^ a b Culbertson, Mary (2024-05-14). "Kilby Block Party is 'life changing' to Mountain West music lovers". KSLTV.com. Retrieved 2025-01-28.
  4. ^ a b "In Salt Lake City's Granary District, a beloved music venue has been sold". The Salt Lake Tribune. Retrieved 2025-01-28.
  5. ^ a b "Salt Lake City's Kilby Block Party Is The Real Deal". Stereogum. 2024-05-13. Retrieved 2025-01-28.
  6. ^ a b "Line Up". Kilby Block Party. Retrieved 2025-02-16.
  7. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference :0 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  8. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference :4 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).


NOTES/QUESTIONS:

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  • Should I include 2025 lineup or no because it hasn't happened yet? - but it is out
  • Should I be including more detail up top? - it feels like there isn't a lot but I'm not sure there's much more to add when looking at other music festival pages.
  • Should I include a little more history on Kilby Court? Just because there's no wiki page on it
  • Should I have the apa citations written out or are the URLs okay because of the automatic citations?
  • Struggling to find sources for the experience section so I might not be able to do that -- do you have any ideas for anything else I can add?

Article body

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  • History
    • In depth on Kilby Court
  • Previous Line-ups
  • How it's grown from just a block party in 2019
  • Experiences - what it offers

Templates in mainspace

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Reagle - Hi! I believe I moved my article but am confused because I'm seeing a message saying, "This template is not to be used in article space." So not completely sure what that means or if it means it hasn't been moved yet. Let me know, thanks! Erinroddy (talk)

Erinroddy, I removed the WikiEdu template. Note that you have a template about too many disambiguation pages. These include pages like Sincerely which should be Sincerely (band). To see these, enable "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" feature in your gadget preferences. -Reagle (talk) 14:54, 10 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Great job, I really enjoyed reading your article! I've heard about the Kilby Block Party Music Festival before despite living nowhere near it so I definitely think its a well needed page. I noticed a bit of redundancy in the origin section and think adding images would help the engagement of the page. I would start linking this page to others to make sure it's not an orphan, might be helpful to do this on some of the artists that have played there. Here is my full feedback: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Erinroddy/Kilby_Block_Party_Music_Festival/BarC23_Peer_Review

BarC23 (talk) 00:21, 21 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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