Talk:KVLY-TV/GA1

GA Review

Passed. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 19:38, 2 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:48, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Boneless Pizza! (talk · contribs) 08:51, 2 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Can you reword "subsumed" and "encapsulating" if you can? As a non-native person, I find it tough to understand.
"was originally assigned to Fargo" What kind of Fargo is that? (this is first mentioned) Is that the place Fargo, North Dakota, or Fargo Telecasting Company?
- Linked Fargo on first body mention.
"North Dakota Television LLC" link LLC
"KXJB's CBS" Link CBS in the body of the article
Not a GA requirement, but I feel like linking website at citations would be better. Perhaps link all Grand Forks Herald, The Fargo Forum, Evansville Courier & Press, and The Daily Republican?
Ref 25 was written as "The Evansville Courier", while ref 26 was "Evansville Press". Can you be consistent and write it as Evansville Courier & Press?
- The citations are to the papers that later merged to form the...wait for it...Evansville Courier & Press and shouldn't be altered. I've linked newspapers on first mention (under any masthead). This sort of issue will occur somewhat often when dealing with older newspapers that later merged.

I think that's all I can find. The article is written very well. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 11:42, 2 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Boneless Pizza!: Responded. Sammi Brie (she/her · t · c) 18:10, 2 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Passing 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 19:35, 2 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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