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GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Jerzy Broszkiewicz/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Piotrus (talk · contribs) 06:09, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Galileo01 (talk · contribs) 16:22, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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(since feedback on the review was requested on GAN talk) Esculenta (talk) 16:44, 10 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Esculenta Thanks. All done! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:18, 12 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • lead is too short
  • "Private life" section/subsection is repeated
  • "the prototype for Iki from the novel" is Iki a character in the novel? Probably best to clarify
  • "According to Frycie, in his works for young adults, Broszkiewicz exposed moral values such as resourcefulness, wisdom, nobility, and courage, and combined various narrative techniques, genres, and literary conventions" it's not a standard English convention to give quotes in italics (instance later too)
  • is the publications list complete? If it is, should say so with source (else "Selected publications")
  • "Notably" see WP:WTW