Talk:I Don't Wanna Live Forever/GA1

GA review

Passed. Vestrian24Bio 11:57, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 13:45, 4 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 14:57, 26 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I will be reviewing this article, expect the initial remarks soon! Vestrian24Bio 14:57, 26 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

@Ippantekina:

EARWIG shows 20.0% - violations unlikely.
According to Link-dispenser,
- 2 links that could be down are missing archive links.
- 23 refs need an archive link.
Remove Category:Universal Music Group singles from the page.

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Fifty Shades Darker: Original Motion Picture Soundtrack is linked twice within the page contents.

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

There are two dead links without archive links..
- Can you specify which one? As my link dispenser shows none. Ippantekina (talk) 04:38, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It doesn't show any now, might've been a bug or something. Vestrian24Bio 11:51, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The page is in the Category:CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list; check the issue and fix it.
- Done. Ippantekina (talk) 04:38, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Add a language variant template.
- Do you mean {{Use American English}} ?
  Yes. Vestrian24Bio 11:56, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No need for CA in the infobox, just LA is enough. Also link Brooklyn.

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The opening sentence should be ""I Don't Wanna Live Forever" (also subtitled as "I Don't Wanna Live Forever (Fifty Shades Darker)") is a song by [...] from the 2017 film soundtrack Fifty Shades Darker: Original Motion Picture Soundtrack". Based on MOS:EGG.

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Should add a summary of the music video to the beginning of the third paragraph in the lead.

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Why the order of genres in lead is different from the infobox.

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Re-format the awards table the usual way (e.g: Fortnight (song), Anti-Hero (song) etc.)
- Done. Ippantekina (talk) 04:24, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The Awards and nominations section should be titled as "Accolades".
- Done. Ippantekina (talk) 04:16, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The Awards table should have a caption.
- Done. Ippantekina (talk) 04:16, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Link liner notes in the credits section and also there should be period (.) between the album's name and ref 9.

Not done because it's not a full sentence. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

In the Background and release should include the labels for US radio releases and as well the Italy radio airplay.
- Done. Ippantekina (talk) 04:43, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Don't need NYC, CA and Virginia for the studios locations; just Brooklyn, LA and Virginia Beach is enough.
Might as well include NightBird Recording Studios and Sterling Sound Studios in the Background and release section.
Genres are again in a different order at the Composition section.

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Rewrite the first sentence of the Composition section as - ""I Don't Wanna Live Forever" is 4 minutes and 5 seconds long, and is a [...]"
Just 3 refs would be enough for "Many critics regarded the production as sultry"; avoid WP:OVERKILL
Awards-related prose should be in the Accolades section; not the Critical reception section.
Update ref 25 with a direct link instead of a redirect.
No need for any of these four notes; refs could be directly included in the prose.
Don't have to mention all the certifications in the "Commercial performance" section.
- Yes I'm just mentioning multi-platinum certs here. Ippantekina (talk) 04:23, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"the music video for "I Don't Wanna Live Former"" - former or forever..

Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"Credits adapted from the liner notes of Fifty Shades Darker: Original Motion Picture Soundtrack" - full stop (.) at the end.

Ditto. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

DUPELINK check;
- Fifty Shades Darker: Original Motion Picture Soundtrack is linked twice within the article's body.

Vestrian24Bio 05:13, 19 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

- - Done. Ippantekina (talk) 03:21, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Ippantekina: just to make sure, you got the response above. Vestrian24Bio 13:31, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Whoops I didn't see them. Will act shortly. Ippantekina (talk) 02:01, 22 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Vestrian24Bio: I think all should be addressed. I had to manually insert archive URLs for some refs as IABot is not adding them... Ippantekina (talk) 07:29, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Source spot-check: pass

All else good, passing for GA. Vestrian24Bio 11:56, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Final review

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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