Talk:History of the University of Pennsylvania
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[edit]Hello, I tried to make this clear in my edit summary, but as someone suggested on the University of Pennsylvania talk space, I separated out the history into its own article (here) by copying and pasting what was already there. I don't know if there are best practices for letting that be known, but I'm just trying to make sure I'm properly attributing where things came from. Hope that makes sense and was the right way to do this! Wikipedian339 (talk) 21:25, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Unnecessary doubling up
[edit]The article repeasts information
"The University of Pennsylvania (Penn or UPenn) is a private Ivy League research university in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, U.S. Its history began when in 1740, when a group of Philadelphians organized to erect a great preaching hall for George Whitefield, a traveling evangelist."
Then a short while later "In 1740, a group of Philadelphians organized to erect a great preaching hall for George Whitefield, a traveling evangelist."
And again... "The building was designed and constructed by Edmund Woolley and was the largest building in Philadelphia at the time, drawing thousands of people the first time in which it was preached." and "The building was designed and constructed by Edmund Woolley and was the largest building in Philadelphia at the time, drawing thousands of people the first time in which it was preached."
This is poor writing. Montalban (talk) 16:01, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
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