Talk:Hashimoto's thyroiditis/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Daphne Morrow (talk · contribs) 10:27, 2 February 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: IntentionallyDense (talk · contribs) 18:29, 28 February 2025 (UTC)

• Upon first glance, their is a lot of work needing to be done here in regards to MOS:LAYOUT. You have a lot of short paragraphs or subsections that should be merged
• There is a lot of overlinking going on here which should be fixed up for readability reasons
• leading to the escape of X-linked self-antigens from presentation in the thymus and loss of T-cell tolerance., Excessive iodine intake is a well-established environmental factor for triggering thyroid autoimmunity. Thyroid autoantibodies are found to be more prevalent in geographical areas with a higher dietary iodine levels. Several mechanisms by which iodine may promote thyroid autoimmunity have been proposed:, Atrophic colloid follicles are lined by Hürthle cells (cells with intensely eosinophilic and granular cytoplasm, which are a metaplasia of the normal cuboidal cells that line the thyroid follicles)., Some or all of the following tests may be performed, in any order:, other symptoms seen with hypothyroidism, such as periorbital myxedema, depend on the current state of progression of the response, especially given the usually gradual development of clinically relevant hypothyroidism., Hypothyroidism caused by Hashimoto's thyroiditis is treated with thyroid hormone replacement agents such as levothyroxine (LT4), liothyronine (LT3), or desiccated thyroid extract (T4+T3). A tablet or liquid taken once a day generally keeps the thyroid hormone levels normal. In most cases, the treatment needs to be taken for the rest of the person's life., Possible reasons for poor conversion include:, are important for adequate conversion., of thyroid hormone treatment to resolve., From this data, it was proposed that Hashimoto's struma could be an autoimmune disease of the thyroid gland. all appear to be unsourced.
• Things like See Causes > Comorbidities, above. are not usually used in articles
• Adtionally you have a lot of out of date sources. Anything before 2020 should be replaced per WP:MEDDATE but I would be willing to work with anything after 2015.
• Given the amount of unsourced material I'm going to have to quickfail this article. IntentionallyDense ^(Contribs) 18:29, 28 February 2025 (UTC)

  Thank you for putting in this effort, it is much appreciated. I will address these concerns and hopefully resubmit. Daphne Morrow (talk) 00:54, 1 March 2025 (UTC)