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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 01:47, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Borsoka (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 204 past nominations.

Surtsicna (talk) 19:22, 14 January 2025 (UTC).[reply]

  • I really like ALT0 but all should be good as far as interest goes. I'm personally fine with giving a few days leeway on the nomination as well. Would you be able to pull the sources for the hooks? And place them here? I'm fine with looking for them myself but it'll be best for then prep builders and queuers will be working on it as well. ~Darth StabroTalk  Contribs 02:43, 22 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Certainly, Darth Stabro. Cited for ALT0, which I too think is best. Surtsicna (talk) 08:20, 22 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT0 approved, Nihil obstat. ~Darth StabroTalk  Contribs 14:42, 22 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Copy Edit

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SilkPyjamas (talk) 17:20, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for your copyedit which allows me to make a GAN. Borsoka (talk) 07:08, 31 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

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Nominator: Borsoka (talk · contribs) 04:47, 11 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 19:47, 10 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I am on it, but it might take me some time. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:47, 10 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • The History of the Expedition to Jerusalem, a chronicle written by the German monk Albert of Aachen contains – needs comma behind "Aachen"?
    Done.
  • the head of Western (or Catholic) Church, – "the" Western (or Catholic) church
    Done.
  • Another crusader leader Godfrey of Bouillon – comma after "leader"
    Done.
  • Bohemund – Is this the same as the aforementioned Bohemond?
    Done.
  • Daimbert of Pisa arrived to the Levant – "arrived in"
    Done.
  • Their conflict was resolved at what Albert of Aachen calls "a council of magnates" – resolved when?
    Done (?)
  • Content-wise an excellent article. However, I found it quite difficult to follow, simply because of the large number of names and facts provided (e.g., some of the names introduced apparently did not play any role in the concil itself). Within all those facts, the key information, the take-aways, the big picture somehow gets lost. I am not sure if it is possible to improve on this, and how, but if you see information in the background sections that are not precisely pertinent to the council itself, it would help the reader to remove them in order to draw attention to the things that matter. Having said that, this point is optional for this GAN. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 13:51, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for you review. I try to shorten the article in accordance with your suggestions in a few days. Borsoka (talk) 00:53, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks. Since this last point is optional, and I am not entirely sure myself if this has to be fixed or what the best solution would be, I am promoting now. Congrats! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 00:00, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
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