Talk:BMF (song)
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[edit]This wording is not optimal for this article, given its intense awkwardness: "Cheerful and whimsical, the lyrics are about SZA's attraction to a handsome and dark-skinned man, whose beauty makes her want to remove her underwear." I would instead look further into the lyrics, this seems like it was written by an AI. Maybe look into articles critics have written delving into lyrics? Even for a summary, this is somewhat dissapointing. 50.47.202.20 (talk) 22:41, 3 April 2025 (UTC)
- You are free to copyedit the artile to improve the wording given WP:BOLD. Currently, all of the sources in the article are the only reliable ones that discuss the lyrics in depth. Elias 🦗🐜 [Chat, they chattin', they chat] 02:45, 4 April 2025 (UTC)