Talk:All I Want Is Everything (Victorious song)/GA1

GA review

Passed. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 16:48, 4 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Shoot for the Stars (talk · contribs) 01:14, 31 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 04:40, 7 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! I will be reviewing this :) I used to (and still do) LOVE this song and so I am happy it has an article :)

Before I do a thorough review, I do think that this article needs a few more in-depth sources so that it strengthens the notability (especially given the tag) and so there is more information to this article and more in depth. Can you try to find some more sources/info/reception? It could be useful using Newspapers.com or another archive website for sources too. Please let me know if you have any questions at all :) DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 04:40, 7 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @DaniloDaysOfOurLives: thanks for picking up the review. I added more sources and reviews and information about the music video. I also found another link for the song but cannot access it. Are you able to view it:

https://web.archive.org/web/20250408040930/http://ww25.bopandtigerbeat.com/2011/09/victorious-all-i-want-is-everything-flash-mob/?subid1=20250408-1409-3061-8a71-6a57b31155f3

Lmk. Thank you. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 05:33, 8 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @DaniloDaysOfOurLives:, did you get my message by chance? Shoot for the Stars (talk) 23:32, 13 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@DaniloDaysOfOurLives: It has been over a week and you haven't responded to any of my pings. I still see you are editing, so if you can't do the review are you able to withdraw? Shoot for the Stars (talk) 22:49, 17 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I am sorry for the lateness. I did not see either of these pings. I will do a full review in the next few days - will ping you when I do my comments. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 02:20, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

All good. I just wanted to make sure if you still wanted to review it. Take your time if the review. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 07:09, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@DaniloDaysOfOurLives:: It has been almost a month since you have started this nomination and nothing has been started. Do you just want to withdraw so someone else can do it? Shoot for the Stars (talk) 00:37, 27 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I am so so sorry - at first, I was quite confused to see your message, as I had given a full review almost two weeks ago, but I cannot find it anywhere. I hence must have forgotten to press submit... I was doing it late at night so I must have not pressed submit and hence why it is not here - Doh! How frustrating. I cannot remember all my points so I will do a fresh review tomorrow after work. I am sorry about this, but expect comments tomorrow. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 01:57, 28 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@DaniloDaysOfOurLives: Can you please withdraw from this nomination? You have been active a lot this month and have not started this review once. It says that a nomination should usually take seven days for a review to be completed and you haven't even started one after almost a month. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 15:59, 29 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Woah, I think that is quite harsh. I did explain to you when I first started the review that it needed more sources, then I explained the two reasons I was late above (about doing the review and it not submitting and also not getting your pings) and promised to do it the next day - and the review is here, as promised:

Full review:

Background and release:

1.) ""All I Want Is Everything" first appeared on the Nickelodeon television sitcom Victorious in a one-hour special titled "Locked Up!" on July 30, 2011" - I checked the source and the source does not mention the song being used or the episode air date. Could you please source this specific sentence?

The TV Guide source says: "Also featured in Saturday's episode (8/7c, Nickelodeon) are two musical performances, the original song "All I Want is Everything" and a cover of the Jackson 5's "I Want You Back." Both songs also are featured on the show's first-ever soundtrack album, which drops Tuesday."

2.) The 2 sources used at the end of the paragraph don't specify when the album was released, so the date should be removed or it should have another source.

Both sources do have the album's release date. My computer shows it for both Apple Music and Spotify

Music and lyrics:

1.) "He additionally handled programming, guitar, bass, and keyboards" - Could you please clarify who "He" is?

Changed it "Gad".

2.) "Bob Hoose and Steven Isaac for Plugged In stated that "All I Want Is Everything" is about "driving, scratch-and-claw cry for stardom": "Too much is not enough/I'm sick of settling for in between/ … We'll sleep when we're dead/'Cause halfway kinda sucks."" - I think this sentence should be reworded as I did not understand it.

Changed

Reception and live performances:

1.) "Mark Wedel, writing for Kalamazoo Gazette, described "All I Want Is Everything" as "demanding"" - Can this be expanded upon slightly? No worries if not

Couldn't find anythign else

2.) "The staff of MTV stated that Justice "looks like she is one determined young woman"" - Can you clarify what they are referring to - the music video, a live performance or the original Victorious performance?

Moved it down to the music video section.

3.) I think the live performances info should be above the reception info

Done

Other:

This article could do with some free pictures to fit the GA criteria - maybe of Victoria Justice?

Once these have been addressed please ping me and I will do a source spotcheck and hopefully pass the article :) Let me know if you need any help DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 18:09, 29 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey DaniloDaysOfOurLives, thanks for the review. I didn't mean to be harsh. I just wanted to make sure you weren't overwhelmed and could do the review. Anyway, let me know if anything else needs to be changed. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 04:16, 30 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, no worries, I understand :) Thank you for your changes! Regarding sources #2 and #3 - thank you for clarifying, I did not realise the date was at the very bottom! However, the spotify source says that it was released on August 1, whereas the itunes one says August 2... It may be worth changing it to "early August 2011" instead? Watchmojo is considered unreliable, but since it is in the reception section, it is okay per WP:RSOPINION. Also regarding your question at the top (I just saw it, sorry) - unfortunately I cannot access it either :( Regarding the last point - could you please pictures of Toby Gad and Victoria Justice so that this meets the criteria with having free images? When I return from work I will do a source spotcheck and if there are no issues I will pass it :) DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 08:21, 30 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@DaniloDaysOfOurLives: I have removed the Spotify source as August 2 is the correct date. I have removed WatchMojo and added pictures of both Victoria and Gad. Please let me know if you have any more suggestions. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 08:25, 4 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This is all great! I have Spotchecked Sources #1, #2, #4, #5, #11 and #15. I am passing the article - well done! :) DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 16:47, 4 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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