Talk:29 (Demi Lovato song)/GA1

GA review

Passed. Medxvo (talk) 15:22, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: CatchMe (talk · contribs) 01:04, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 02:26, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

1. Well-written

"It was released through Island Records on August 17, 2022" - "Island Records released it on August 17, 2022" if you'd like to avoid passive voice
"was subject of ... on its" - "was subject to ... for its"?
"Holy Fvck while others" - a comma before "while"?
"while also reached" - "while also reaching"
"A Vevo-produced live performance music video" - Was it a music video?
"from by the" - remove "by"
"The lyrical content of "29" depict" - "depicts"?
"she had learn" - "she had learned"?

2. Verifiable

Refs 1, 6, 12, 19, 28, 35 - missing the author
Ref 6 - missing the date
The British Vogue, Rolling Stone, Los Angeles Times, and Business Insider refs have limited access

Spotchecks from this revision

Refs 3, 5, 6, 8, 9, 11(a), 11(b), 12(c), 13, 14, 17, 18, 20, 22, 23, 25, 28, 31, 34, 35, 36, 39 - no issues except for ref 22 below
Ref 22 - "mind-blowing" or "eye-popping"?

3. Broad // 4. Neutral // 5. Stable // 6. Illustrated
No issues

I think that's all. I've also made some minor copyedits here, feel free to make any adjustments. If you're interested, I have a GAN for Mean (song), which I'm considering nominating for FAC if the GAN goes well. I think your comments would be super helpful before starting the FAC process, but I understand if you don't have the time since it is a relatively long article... :S Medxvo (talk) 02:26, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Medxvo: I think everything is done now. I will be glad to take that review and help a bit with my humble knowledge lol!! CatchMe (talk · contribs) 06:10, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Everything looks good, passing now :)) Medxvo (talk) 15:22, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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