Talk:2025 Iran internal crisis
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[edit]This article is badly in need of in-text attribution and needs to be cleared of weasel words like "it appears". ꧁Zanahary꧂ 14:04, 21 July 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for your note, could you help me improve my article? did you find any references you want to send my way so i can add more information? Razgura (talk) 14:12, 21 July 2025 (UTC)
- I don't want to get too in-the-weeds of this article, but for example: "revealing serious weaknesses in its governance, security apparatus, and administrative capacity" is an extraordinary claim that requires in-text attribution if it's going to be repeated on Wikipedia—and even then, it probably should not be used in the article's lead. Later, you say "These measures ... have been interpreted by observers as indicative of heightened regime paranoia and a perceived threat of domestic unrest or infiltration." These observers need to be named, and ideally quoted. Take a look at WP:WEASEL for explanation. ꧁Zanahary꧂ 14:26, 21 July 2025 (UTC)