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Passed. 750h+ 03:14, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: EF5 (talk · contribs) 14:02, 3 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 03:04, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


@EF5: reviewing as part of WP:GARC. 750h+ 03:04, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

750h+, it's been five days, just a reminder ping. I'll get to reviewing your GARC later today, sorry it's taken so long. :) — EF5 20:09, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Reviewing this, my comments will be below. 750h+ 04:04, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
lead
  • In the evening hours of April 27, 2014 remove "hours"
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • retained peak windspeeds of 190 from what i've searched "wind speeds" is always two separate words
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • first time as it entered into the city remove "into"
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
meteorological synopsis
tornado summary
  • There, two homes were destroyed and another add a comma after 'destroyed'
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Looks fine, happy to pass. 750h+ 03:13, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • A recreational vehicle dealership ==> "A recreational vehicle (RV) dealership" since you use the acronym later.
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • highway was completely destroyed 'completely' is redundant
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • some poorly-anchored homes were remove the hyphen
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • high-end EF4 strength, a town which was struck by remove "a town"
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • were all completely destroyed in downtown 'completely' is redundant
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • The crumpled remains of a metal fertilizer tank was found ==> "The crumpled remains of a metal fertilizer tank were found"
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Meadows subdivision at the northeast ==> "Meadows subdivision on the northeast"
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • revealed that most of the homes
? EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
i don't know what i meant to say here 750h+ 03:12, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • remained on the ground for 56 minutes, and traveled removed the comma
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
aftermath
  • Sixteen people lost their lives as a direct result ==> "Sixteen people were killed as a direct result" MOS:EUPHEMISM
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • ditch near the home were still standing, and that remove the comma
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
case studies
  • researchers from the Texas Tech University remove "the"
 Done. EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Sources and images look fine. @EF5: i'm happy to pass once my concerns above are addressed. 750h+ 04:24, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@750h+: How does it look? EF5 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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