Draft talk:Microaqueous Biosystem
Feedback from New Page Review process
[edit]I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: This draft is written as a scientific article or textbook chapter. Wikipedia is not for any of these, it is a repository of documented information. The article needs a complete rewrite. In addition User:Tsuneoyamane has added a large number of self-citations, clear WP:COI.