Draft talk:Dr. Sudhir Mehta

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Improving the Draft:Dr. Sudhir Mehta – Neutrality, Notability & Reliable Sources

Hello everyone,

I am seeking feedback on improving the Draft:Dr. Sudhir Mehta page to ensure it meets Wikipedia’s neutrality, verifiability, and notability standards. A recent comment raised concerns about the article’s tone, the strength of its references, and potential conflict of interest. I’d like to address these issues transparently and collaboratively.

Key Areas for Improvement:

Neutral Tone:

I have revised the draft to remove promotional language, ensuring it does not read like a LinkedIn profile. If any specific sections still need further adjustments, I welcome suggestions.

Strengthening Notability with Reliable Sources:

I have added more independent, third-party sources to demonstrate Dr. Mehta’s impact in his field. If there are references that do not meet reliability standards, I’m happy to replace them with better ones.

Conflict of Interest Transparency:

I want to ensure there is no undisclosed paid editing concern. I am contributing in good faith and open to guidance on compliance with Wikipedia’s COI guidelines.

Next Steps: Would appreciate feedback on whether the revised references sufficiently establish notability.

Are there any specific areas where the tone still needs improvement?

Any further suggestions before resubmission?

Looking forward to your input! Thanks. MH-wiki2025 (talk) 09:42, 8 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]