Draft:Conquest of Damot

Conquest of Damot
Date	1317
Location	Damot
Result	Ethiopian Victory
Belligerents
Ethiopian Empire	Kingdom of Damot

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Declined by Wikieditor019 2 years ago. Last edited by Jay 54 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Background

The Kingdom of Damot was a Pagan kingdom situated south of the Ethiopian Empire. Amda Seyon would successfully campaign against Damot and conquer them at around 1317.^[1]^[2]

References

^ Taddesse, Church and State, pp. 135ff.
^ Quirin, James (1992). The evolution of the Ethiopian Jews: a history of the Beta Israel (Falasha) to 1920. University of Pennsylvania Press. p. 43. ISBN 9780812231168.

[1] Taddesse, Church and State, pp. 135ff.

[2] Quirin, James (1992). The evolution of the Ethiopian Jews: a history of the Beta Israel (Falasha) to 1920. University of Pennsylvania Press. p. 43. ISBN 9780812231168.

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