Draft:Abu Zaabal factory massacre

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Declined by Sophisticatedevening 22 days ago. Last edited by Sophisticatedevening 22 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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On the morning of February 12, 1970, while the War of Attrition was confined to the front, the Israel Defense Forces carried out an air raid that bombed the Abu Zaabal factory, which had 1,300 workers. Around 80 of them were killed, 150 were injured, and the factory was burned.^[1]^[2]

References

^ "Pittsburgh Post-Gazette - Google News Archive Search". news.google.com. Retrieved 2025-04-05.
^ "Middle East: In Cold Blood - TIME". 2009-04-28. Archived from the original on 28 April 2009. Retrieved 2025-04-05.

[1] "Pittsburgh Post-Gazette - Google News Archive Search". news.google.com. Retrieved 2025-04-05.

[2] "Middle East: In Cold Blood - TIME". 2009-04-28. Archived from the original on 28 April 2009. Retrieved 2025-04-05.

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