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Comment: In accordance with Wikipedia's Conflict of interest policy, I disclose that I have a conflict of interest regarding the subject of this article. AaskASC (talk) 00:35, 16 March 2025 (UTC)

Aaron Coutts is the Director of the Office for Veterans at the Victorian Department of Families, Fairness and Housing. He is currently leading Victoria’s state participation in the Defence and Veteran Suicide Royal Commission, a significant initiative aimed at addressing systemic issues and risk factors relevant to suicide and suicide behaviors among serving and ex-serving Defence members.

Career

Aaron has dedicated over 20 years to serving in the Australian Army, with deployments to Iraq and Afghanistan. His extensive military career, combined with his roles in veteran wellness, spans over 25 years. This experience has provided him with invaluable insight into the challenges faced by Defence personnel.

Director of the Office for Veterans, Victorian Department of Families, Fairness and Housing (2016 - present)

Strategic Programs Executive Officer, Wodonga TAFE (2018 - 2022)

Chair, Indigo Shire Council Audit and Risk Committee (2019 - 2023)

Agency Head and Diplomat, Australian Embassy (2014 - 2017), including during the 2017 coup in Türkiye

Representative Rugby Union Player

Sprint Kayak Medalist

Contributions and Impact

Aaron’s efforts have been pivotal in enhancing the support system for veterans in Victoria. He was instrumental in designing and delivering the Victorian Veteran Card**, which provides veterans with access to various services and benefits. His leadership in the Royal Commission is aimed at implementing reforms to improve mental health and wellbeing for Defence personnel and their families. Through his national committee memberships, he has shaped the strategic thinking of senior government members, ensuring that the needs and interests of veterans are prioritized. Additionally, he provides specialist advice and support to the Victorian Minister for Veterans.

Professional Affiliations

Member, Victorian Consultative Forum, Department of Veterans' Affairs, Victoria, Australia

Member, Commonwealth States and Territories Executive Committee

Member, Victorian Commemoration Council

Honors and Awards

Aaron has been recognized for his dedication to supporting veterans and advocating for their needs. His awards include:

Australian Active Service Medal (AASM)

Iraq Campaign Medal (ICAT)

Defence Service Medal

Defence Long Service Medal

Return from Active Service Badge

Army Combat Badge

References