Talk:Swimming at the 2024 Summer Olympics – Men's 100-metre breaststroke
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Nominator: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 12:46, 15 March 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 06:05, 2 May 2025 (UTC)
Will review in a few, article seems interesting. Arconning (talk) 06:05, 2 May 2025 (UTC)
- @It is a wonderful world Here are my comments! Arconning (talk) 12:36, 6 May 2025 (UTC)
- Hi @Arconning, thanks again for another in depth review. I made all the changes you suggested. IAWW (talk) 20:42, 6 May 2025 (UTC)
Prose and MoS
[edit]Lead and infobox
[edit]- "and shortly after that he stepped back from swimming,", stepped back is quite informal. This could probably replaced with "he announced his break from competitive swimming."
- Both quotes in the lead would require sourcing.
Background
[edit]- "The event was held at Paris La Défense Arena, which was converted to a swimming pool for the swimming events.[4]", this statement could be moved to the start of the Heats section.
Qualification
[edit]- No issues.
Heats
[edit]- Chadd Ning's name could be shortened.
- I feel like Dutchman would be a bit too informal.
Semifinals
[edit]- No issues.
Finals
[edit]- "since the to six swimmers finished within 0.29 seconds", omit "to" and add "of each other"
- See lead comment regarding Peaty's quote.
Media
[edit]- Image used has proper licensing and is relevant to the article. All good.
Refs
[edit]- Earwig's alright.
- Ref checks: 1, 7, 15, 17, 23. All good.
Misc
[edit]- No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral.
MOS-compliant lead: trivial race details removed for clarity and relevance
[edit]Previously the lede mentioned there were two laps to finish a 100m race and pool is 50m long. I trimmed that filler so to condense the lead in line with MOS:LEDE to highlight notable content. See prior comments already resolving same issue: Talk:Swimming at the 2024 Summer Olympics – Women's 100 metre freestyle#top. Also further explanation here: User:IP49XX/Why MOS Matters. IP49XX (talk) 01:49, 13 May 2025 (UTC)