Talk:Hayseed Stephens/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 15:16, 26 June 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:52, 3 July 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:52, 3 July 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• He attended Abilene High School in Abilene, Texas.[1] He helped Abilene win the state football title in 1955 and 1956.-->He attended Abilene High School in Abilene, Texas, where he helped the football team win titles in 1955 and 1956.
• Stephens was a member of the Hardin–Simmons Cowboys of Hardin–Simmons University from 1957 to 1960. is there a way to reword this so that "Hardin-Simmons" isn't repeated so quickly in succession?
• In 1958, he totaled 68-->The next season, he totaled 68 would sound better
• conpletions spelling
• the Jets next game should be "Jets'", right?
• He became a Christian in 1978.[3] Stephens and his wife founded the Living Way Ministries in 1980. I think these sentences could be combined to improve the flow of the text
• You should link Evangelicalism and I would recommend deleting , teaching the Bible as self-evident
• References:
  • Formatting: there are a number of times where you have consecutive sentences cited to the same source. These can be combined, having just one inline citation at the end of the consecutive sentences (Ref 1 and 3 especially, also 7)
  • Reliability: all appear reliable for what is being cited
  • Spot checks: 3, 7, 11, 14, 19
• Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:15, 3 July 2025 (UTC)

  Thanks, I think I addressed everything. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 00:07, 4 July 2025 (UTC)

  • • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:52, 4 July 2025 (UTC)

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